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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read the chapter, where it wa cute off right after it said that Lucas had 3 missed calls, and now, that you've got the next part put up, but I think you might have gotten rid of the part with Anna and David's talk, before the missed call thing.
Anyway, love the story :D
Anyway, love the story :D
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! They made up and had man sex! Go Lucas! I am glad Lucas and David got back together. Anna is just like my mom - She is the queen of bad timing- always showing up or calling at the worst possible times. I would think Lucas learn't from what happened the last time he left David behind to go in search of Anna. Let's hope history does not repeat itself. Great story. I am really enjoying reading it.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! I'm so glad that they made up, and made out *giggle*
can't wait to read the part where david fucks lucas!
hope you update soon!! can't wait! : )
can't wait to read the part where david fucks lucas!
hope you update soon!! can't wait! : )
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! A sequel!!! can't wait to read it! so sad that this was cute short and all. can't wait to see what happens in the next story!! upload it soon please! already looking forward to it!! ; )
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the ending twist to this story. I am sorry for David for being alone now that his foster father is gone. He is obviously more vulnerable than he is willing to admit. I am glad that Lucas will be staying with him. They can share houses. I am relieved that Anna managed to reconcile with them too. I am looking forward to the sequel.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, The. Best. Chapter. Ever! I'm so glad they made up! Finally! I feel sorry for Anna tho. How come they've been "friends" for som many years and she never told him how she felt? And she treated him like crap in front of her "friends" b/c otherwise she'd be outcasted too. What kind of a friend is that? Anyway, great chapter, gotta go read the next one!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Indearingly funny, with a dash of reality, I would love to see it as a movie. Your character work is great and believeable. Please write more stories, I love to read them. Good Yaoi! G
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 7 and wanted to say that I love the new dynamic between Lucas, David, and Anna. Okay off to the last one!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the last chapter and poor David. He's not taking things very well. I think them moving in together at this point is a bad idea for them. They barely get along as it is. So I'd hate to see how they'll get along when they're in each others face 24/7. I'm pretty sure good old dad will figure it out anyway. Well, I'm off to look at the sequel!
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just left a review and then I see a new chapter up already. Great one actually. David and Anna sitting around and drowning their sorrows together is really funny, in a pitiful kind of way. I liked it when he told her he still hated her. I couldn't help but snicker.