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October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow but the master was an absolute dickwad. I disliked him and most of what went on in this chapter hopefully the next one will be better. Poor bloom.
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October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yummy update. I'm so curious about what Bloom is going to do. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Riku? I don't know why, but I like it. x3
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, can't wait for the next chapter. update soon please.
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a shit Stephen is. Why would he tell Chaz that stuff if he knows his fears? And he knows Chaz trusts him? What an ass.
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. The only criticism I have is you rely on talking too much to tell the story. The conversations are fine, but it gets rather boring when the story turns into "he said, she said"
I would much rather know that while Bloom was packing he found an old t-shirt he threw into his suitcase. Or that his roommate really liked his jacket and Bloom gave it to him. Add more action and descriptions and I think this story could be even better than it already is.
I would much rather know that while Bloom was packing he found an old t-shirt he threw into his suitcase. Or that his roommate really liked his jacket and Bloom gave it to him. Add more action and descriptions and I think this story could be even better than it already is.
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very well written. I really enjoyed reading about the camaraderie (I know I spelled that wrong; I'm too lazy to look it up!) between all the band members. The Rock guy is really funny! Good idea Stephen gave Bloom about changing the piercing. Anyway, good job; I look forward to the next chapter.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
grate chapters i like your story i cant wait for more
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter hehe cherrys are nice well i cant wait for the next update
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Jesse was so eager to please Bloom. Sasha is such a jealous type. I can't imagine how Bloom manages to work at that place and he still lives in that horrible neighborhood. I hope he will leave and go live with Jesse.