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i think the nurse is trying to turn him straight right since she play the radio about the preachers?

I'm a christian and I have gay friends. I don't condemn them for their choices but see them as my friends.

Finally, I was able to read the last two chapters! Took me all freakin day tho! Nurse Sterning; listening to all those evangelists, family Christian value people. She probably hates gay people; she's out to get Dillon. She's helping to alienate him from his friends. Why didn't Dillon ask to borrow cash from her so he could get that cab? So, all those months living w/Dillon and Nurse Ratchett, Seth never had any intuition that something was "off" with her? Shit, she's gonna prevent Seth from coming in b/c she's leaving and Dillon fell asleep. This isn't good. Pls. update soon!!!!!!! I'm on pins and needles!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm hating her more by the minute!!!!!! What is her fucking problem?!?!?! Arg!!!!
And no, trust me, I won't be disappointed, no matter what you write. It's a bad habit of mine to make guesses about characters, their thoughts and future actions (I'm too impatient lol), cheer for them to do something and then be ecstatic whatever they do because an author always knows his story and characters best. We readers just get to interpret them the way we want to. And that nurse is a BITCH!!
So trust me, no way I'm getting disappointed when I'm enjoying the story this much. Doesn't mean I'm not gonna pray to the muses for them to massacre that awful, pathetic excuse for a human being!!
Thanks for updating so soon!! :) :)

oh my gosh!! Why is Nurse Sterning keeping the calls a secret? And did she just drug Dillon?!?

what's the matter with the nurse? Also, Seth should come back soon!

New reader here!!! Hoooo, I love your story. Good work.
Wow, It's not often that people write about blind (or other infirmity) person. I like how you make it easy to see what he cannot see. (hope I'm clear loll)
The big problem that guys have, it's they don't communicate, like in your story, but it's make the story much more interesting loll.
Just finish chappy 6, I knew something was strange with the lack of visit when he mention that.
Now I want &?$*?*/?* the nurse......can I? (ask persetme2, I'm really good to torture her bad guy).
mouhahahaha :)
Gwen
p.s. If something's not clear, sorry English's not my mother tongue.

What the hell is her problem?! That nurse should get fired! Seriously, what a bitch! I wonder if her behaviour just neglect or if it's malicious... Great update, can't wait for more!!

OMG. Nurse Sterning is just EVIL! Grrr... I want to pull her hair out and strangle her! Poor little, or not so little actually, Dillon. My heart was breaking for him the entire chapter and I kept thinking something wasn't quite right about his buddies disappearing on him once he'd decided to let them all back into his life. And poor Seth. Ah man! He's just too pitiful really. Oh. BTW. Did I mention that the Sprite/Seth scene is hilarious? I about fell over laughing when she came off with that cock comment. Update please! You've got me hooked now so I want more!

I missed two updates!! Thanks for the updates! Dillon is getting more independent and Seth realized that he loves Dillon...I hope he is able to admit that to Dillon!! I love Alyzandera (Sprite) she's an awesome character...poor Seth having a wet dream like that and being heard...how embarassing! Keep up the good work!

Noooooo! You can't stop there! (Actually a perfect stopping point if I do say so myself lol) Bad Dillon! Bad! You can't fire Seth! And shame on you for playing hide the sausage with Dave... Well, actually that part was kinda hot so I'll forgive you, but still... Great story BTW. Nice build up actually. Most authors would have just skipped over all the rehab, even though it's really important to show the character's emotional progression. I gotta say, that massage scene was pretty hot too. Yummy. Nothing like a bottle of oil and two sexy men to get things 'up and going'. Wink. Wink. Nudge. Nudge. Okay, I'll shut up now. Very interesting though. Brad a total dickhead BTW. Just thought I'd toss that out there! (^_~) More please.