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huhu,
what the heck is this stupid women doing to Dillon.
Is she some evil nurse bitch,from a stephen king novel?
Seth really needs to rescue him!!!
Can`t wait to read the conversation between Dave and Seth:)
Greetings,Jules

EVIL NURSE!!!! HIT HER HIT HEEEEERRRRRR!!!!

And dang Seth, you should have turned into a pile of ash from Dave's glare! :P

Good work here!

I just started reading this last night, but wanted to comment before I continued. This story is SO FUCKING EXCELLENT!!!! I have been in tears since the accident. Your writing is superb, you are so descriptive, the reader can feel everything Dillon is going thru. This is one of the most riveting stories I have read on here and I'll be sorry when I finish all the chapters. I was crying along w/Dillon when he was in the hospital, when that shit ass ex of his broke up w/him, when he got home and fell into his depression (who wouldn't?) and when he took his first step. You have such a beautiful way with words and expressions; I am in awe of your writing. I'll review when I finish the story; hopefully later if my kids let me near the computer! lol

She's in it for the money the BITCH!!!! She NEEDS to get what's coming for her, I'm counting on you!!!! I want to know why Dave was looking at Seth with such contempt too... Great update, can't wait for more!!

Ah never mind :p I reread the chapter and got it lol Dave is so cute! Quite overprotective isn't he? Hopefully he'll give a large piece of his mind to Seth who'll storm into Dillion's house right past The Bitch and whisk him away!

thanks for the update! You update so quickly! Seth really has great friends...poor Dillon he sounds so lonely...its sad. I hope Seth goes to Dillon soon!

"No," Seth shook his head. "That girl is bubblier than the bubbliest champagne. It’s amazing it’s not annoying as hell."

I liked the comparison between Sprite and champagne!

I didn't have time to review no.7 you put chappy no.8.
You write fast, not that I complain, seen you like to put cliffy loll
It's make the wait less long.
She drugs him!!!!!!!!!! How she could?!?!?!?! Grrrrrrrr, evil nurse that deserve to be put on a Sling and snap his feet and ass with bamboo stick until she bleed.....
Hope that Seth's not gonna turn back. Save my/ours poor Dillon.
I really like your style of writing, the story and or course D and S. ( ho...my mind his so dirty, I see D/s in my head now lolll)
Gwen

No freaking way!!! That evil b**ch actually drugged Dillon! Uh oh! Watch out now! This woman's going down!! Now I bet she's gonna try and mess with Seth too! I hope she tries to kidnap him and tie him up and he gets away and smacks her right in the face and then kick's her weird, demented ass and then beats her like a pinata! Is she doing this to get free reign of Dillon's house with a mix of 'I'm Christian hear me roar while I straighten out all the evil fornicators of the world' kinda thing?!! Jeez! Her and her evangelical radio stations should go straight to hell! **takes deep breath and blows it back out** Whoa! Sorry about that! Got caught up in the moment there but two flipping months she's been doing this! AHHH! And I bet she was just happy as a lark when poor, pitiful Dillon wanted to catch a cab and didn't have any cash. And he was so happy in his hot, sexy club wear. I nearly cried when he was forced to drag himself back upstairs and take them off again. On another note: that whole dildo in the shower thing... Holy flying sheep shit Batman! Yowzah! That was so freaking hot and that's all I can say about that. I have visions of Wallbangers dancing in my head and I like it!!! More pleaz! Pretty please? **puppy dog eyes** You can't blame me! That's one hell of a cliffhanger you got there! lmao Back to work for me!

holy crap, nurse sterling is psycho! i want to stab her with a blunt spork, she makes me so angry! wonderful story though, all of your characters are fresh, vivid and engaging! i'm really looking forward to the next installment, but i do hope that nurse sterling's unsavory behavior will be dealt with quickly!

Man, I feel the tension mounting! Seth is going to ravish him!