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for My Life Is You - COMPLETE

by madrachadevvi

person Lisa
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, ok, so Nurse Ratchett, I mean Sterning is just a sad, lonely old lady who misses her son. I still don't like her for what she did to Dillon and Seth. But,,,,,, I am SOOOOOO glad Dillon saved Seth and in turn, Seth saved Dillon and they made up! GREAT, GREAT, GREAT last two updates! Can't wait to read more once Seth takes a shower!! Hahahahahh
person vlight
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh finally they caught the psycho nurse!
Thanks for the quick upadtes..
I'm not sure why my reviews didn't show up :(
Or did they?
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I´m happy that Dillon and Seth are free and hn... I´m sorry for nurse
person JJ
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nurse Sterning is crazy...and in need of some serious help...Sprite can sure make a bad situation lighten up...I noticed that you have the next chapter posted....so I go to read it....
person JJ
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was some update...I guess I feel a bit sorry for Nurse Sterning...only a little though...tiny...very very very small....

I'm happy that Seth admitted to Dillon that he loves him...yeah...and that they both came out of this situation alright and closer together!! Can't wait to read what happens next...Keep up the good work!!
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you ended chap. 10 with "he was eager to begin the next chapter of his life". It's a nice way to end a chapter. Anyways, I really love this story, and I feel so bad for Dillon. I have a feeling that he's going to meet Brad again. And is he going to get a new nurse?
Anyways, good story, and good luck on your future writing! (Can't wait for your next update!)
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No Cliff-hanger? No Cliff-hanger?! That's the ultimate cliff-hanger! The new relationship Cliff-hanger is the biggest!!! Ahhhhhhhh! More! More! More!!! Okay. I'll be good now. I gotta say that I really didn't feel all that sorry for Nurse Kinda-Wanna-Kill-Ya. I was more hoping that Seth would whack her really hard with that cane a few times. I mean, to go so far as to unhook all the phones so Dillon wouldn't hear them ring? Jeez! I get that she's mentally disturbed but grrrr... Anxious for more now! Pretty please? Did I mention how good this story is BTW?
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're awesome, words can't even begin to describe how much I love this story.
person Avernion
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This better not be the last chapter!!

I read the whole story in one sitting. Since I am a slow reader it took me about three hours. Man, that makes me slow >.< Finding out Nurses Whackjob’s true motives, I did pity her. She wasn’t a mean controlling freak, she was a heartbroken basket-case. Those two are very different. It didn’t make the things she did less hateful, but more understandable and sad. Now I’m looking forward to everything clearing up. He he he he.

You have a very pleasant ‘voice’ in your story. It had been a wonderful reading (can you even say that? o_O ). And joyously enough, it was very none-cliché. Yay and yay! :D
person kikib77
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
looks like the nurse wanted to marry dellon and seize her hands on his money...or something