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for My Life Is You - COMPLETE

by madrachadevvi

person kikib77
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sheesh... such misunderstanding. looking forward to when they make up...
person JJ
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...good job!! *hands you a plate of cookies for a job well done* Jeremy is so f*cking awesome! I love him!! He is such a great best friend...and character. Seth don't be stupid!! Go and see Dillon.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I didn't see this before! I love "blind" romances and yours is the first I have read to incorporate such realism. Oh, it was a good read! Can't wait for more!
person kikib77
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that's was really good.

I can understand a bit that this nurse was grieving over her son who died so much that she couldn't separate the reality from delusions. I hope a shrink will help her.

Are you going to do another chapter? I hope so...
person kikib77
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah... I forgot to add one more thing

Will Dillon be able to see a bit again? I remember that the doctor said that at most hopefully he might see the shapes and lights, right?

So I guess that if he is able to see a bit, he could see what seth looks like a bit or something.
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, well. My anger and hatred for Nurse Sterning sort of evaporated... Not completely, but well. She's not a money hungry bitch, she's a heartbroken partially insane mother who lost her son to a drunken driver. Wow that revelation just blew me away! I really wasn't expecting it. She needs some help though... badly.
Now, if she kills Sethikins... well. I don't think she wants to know what I'll do. Mostly cause I don't know either. But it'll be bad. Very bad. Ok, I'll stop and go to sleep now.
Great update!!
person kylee123
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I love all the characters. Nurse Sterling is a fabulous villian. Sometimes the villians are overdone but she is just perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When I read the part about the woman in the police station I imagined it being Nurse Sterning, and that the cops were as forceful as they are in movies and TV shows. The idea made me smile, I think I speak for everyone when I say the word bitch doesn't even begin to describe her. Anyways, awesome story. It's too bad that Dillon didn't know Seth before he lost his eyesight, but then there wouldn't be much of a plot. Oh, and I love Sprite.
person Lisa
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had to read this chapter 2ce to figure out that old Nurse Ratchett poisoned Dillon! What a wretched shit! I hope you tie her to a stake and torture her! hahahah J/K Not!
person aoe
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude, two chapter whammy for the win! ahaha. i'm sadistically pleased that nurse sterning got whacked by dillon's cane, lol. if i had it my way though, she woulda still been stabbed by a blunt spork. i'm glad seth and dillon have gotten together, and i'm anxious to see what other "soap opera drama" llamas await them in the future.