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Hi, I wanted to answer your question before I read the chapter; otherwise, I'd forget by the time I got down to the end! Short-term memory sucks! Must be old age! Anyway, yeah, I am a sap and cry a lot over sweet, sentimental stories. But this story was incredible. Your writing style is amaziing and the words you use to convey the emotions, were very prolific. I felt like it was ME in the hospital bed w/the bandages on my eyes. I FELT Dillon's lonliness and despair. It was amazing.

Brad Scumpit is just my name for Brad Pitt. I know, I know, people LOVE him and that slut he's with, they save the world, save the children, blah, blah, blah. I personally, can't stand them both. What they did to his ex was unforgivable. Maybe I feel this way b/c I had a the same experience as Jennifer, minus the money, fame, and add some kids to the mix and it could be the same. LOL Anyways, so, I know people on here will hate me from now on, but so be it.

I hope your Brad has better morals than the real Brad, altho what your Brad did is also unforgivable. So, with that, I'm gonna go back and read the chapter! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story and will be so sad when it's over.

Wow, totally didn't expect the Belinda and Eric tragedy. How truly sad. How courageous of Belinda to never even show any signs of hatred toward Eric. She is an amazing woman. And yes, I was crying as I was reading that also! You do have a way with words!

Thank God for Jeremy; but why didn't Jeremy speak up sooner and offer to take Dillon to Brad's? That's what I would have done! The second Seth was out the door, I'd be like let's go! I'm glad Jeremy had that talk with Seth; I think it cleared a lot up in Seth's mind about Dillon. Can't wait to read how they kiss and make up! Hahahaha

All I can say is &@**^@*$&%(!&#*%#*&!(#*$(!*)(_!%#^&$%~!~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dammit Dillon! Everything finally settles down and you have to go and be so stubbornly independent in a strange house!!! Poor guy! Poor Seth! He's gonna feel like shit over this! I hope that Dillon's okay though! Try not to sweat the lack of review thing. Apparently that's an illness that's been going around lately. Don't know what's up with that... But it couldn't be anything to do with your last chapter because it was awesome as was every one so far! Update Update Update!!!! Must know the outcome!

Thanks for that steamy update!! How can you not like Jeremy...he's such a stand up guy...that was such an evil cliffhanger...Dillon...I hope he will be alright!?!? Dillon has really adapted to his blindness quite well, he knows the differences between Seth and Eric....and the smex was hot....leaves a plate of cookies...update soon?!?

oh nooo Dillon fell!
sex scene seems so real *nosebleed*
hoping to see more

Great update!! I can forgive nurse Sterning; she was partially insane and driven by grief and I guess they managed to stop her before she did anything too awful so there was no irremediable harm done. I like how you portrayed Dillion's emotional debate about what to think of her and of the events that happened.
But Brad? He can rot in hell for all I care. Even if he felt he wasn't strong enough to deal with Dillion because of his guilt over the accident and living with a 'crippled' for the rest of his life, then the least he could have done would have been to stay by his side as a friend, and/or make his feelings known at a better time. Because just maybe after a few weeks he would have realised it wasn't that hard and that the relationship could work out fine. And if it didn't then too bad and at least it wouldn't feel like betrayal and abandonment. I know he got scared and it's a very human reaction when dealing with such a life changing event (I like how you didn't portray him as a complete monster; he's just an egocentric coward really); but that doesn't make it any better.
He walked out of Dilion's life for his own reasons and now, he has no right to waltz back it when the tough patch is over. He acted like a selfish ass, and I hope the bastard is left biting the dust. Can't wait to see how you're going to end it!

What will Brad?

This was such a great chapter! I was in tears throughout it. Ok, I'm just sappy. But Dillon was feeling so lost and all alone and for him to find out that his friends were trying to see him and call him the whole time was great. Now he knows they didn't abandon him. But hey, wtf is BRAD scumpit doing there, oh sorry, wrong Brad. This Brad is worse actually. But really, what the fuck is he doing there? He better not be there to beg Dillon to take him back! What a fucker! I hope Seth doesn't get there while Brad is still there. How can you leave it like that, pls. hurry up and update, I'm on the edge of my seat!

thanks for the update...I tried posting my reply earlier...and I don't think it went through. Glad to see that Seth is alright...and that Eric and Belinda accept Dillon...glad to see that Jeremy is still good friends with Dillon...can't wait to read the next chapter!

I absolutely cannot believe that I forgot to review last chapter! Bad me! I read it last night and honestly thought that I did. Sigh. Oh well. I'm gonna make sure I review this time. It was just gut wrenching to read about poor Seth getting so desperate to get to his Dillon and then walking in on a scene like that. Pitiful guy but I totally understood his reaction since most people in real life would have done about the same thing. And the story behind... crap! I've gone brain dead! Belinda and Eric (had to go look up Eric's name lol) is just... horrible is the only thing I can think of. I mean, I have to admit I was curious because the first thing that came to mind a few chapters back was that he cheated on her, which I immediately tossed out as a possibility judging by their relationship now. But I still never would have imagined anything like that. Cheers go to Jeremy though. I kind of wondered if he might go Seth hunting when he left Dillon with Eric because it seemed more in character for him to have stayed with Dillon until Seth got back in case he needed emotional support or something like that. Great chapter though and too bad there are only two left. **hugs**