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Wow! I think im in love with you lol. That was perfect. The story was amazing as were the characters. I cant wait for you to write another, no pressure lol.
vic xx

This story was awesome.

Hey, I reviewed the last chapters! They were great, the whole Belinda and Eric tragedy. Anyway, I didn't read the latest chapters yet, just wanted to throw that out there that I reviewed. And I'm sad this story is over - it was GREAT!!!!!! Now I gotta go finish reading.

So beautiful! The last lines remind me of Tara and Willow from BtVS; when they first started going together she told her something along those lines. Anyways, it would be totally awesome if you did a side story. Maybe even have part of it at the wedding. I know I've said it before, but you are truly awesome.

Oh my goodness! My heart was just breaking for them both. Poor Seth who was barely out of the hospital himself being forced to wait all that time not knowing what was going on and wanting to be there for Dillon. When Dillon woke up and was confused and wanting Seth it was just so... Oh my. I could just see him the way he was the first time he woke up that way and was looking for Brad only to find out that he was being abandoned. Then to wake up that way a second time and have to wonder where Seth was. No wonder he got so annoyed and desperate to see him! I would have been too and stupid hospitals with their stupid rules. Sure they're there for the patient's protection but I'd be willing to bet that if Sprite had walked up and said 'I'm his girlfriend' they would have taken her straight back to see him. (I know that's not where you were going with this chapter it's just me getting carried away with excitement). Seth should have just lied to them and said he was his brother or something. Of course that might have taken some explaining when the nurses found out the truth later on, but who cares!!!

Sorry I was rambling. Reviewing while in a good mood is never the best idea huh? On to the ending! OMG! I mean come on! Could you have made that shower scene any more FREAKING HOT???????!!!!!! I was all like... urrrrrrr. ***brain turns to mush as drool begins to flood the keyboard....**** Ten minutes later ***jumps up in a panic and grabs roll of paper towels in a vain attempt to do damage control*** Then I was like "Screw it! Honey! I need a mop over here! Jesus H. Christ!!!" Okay. Luckily the keyboard somehow managed to survive the deluge and is still functioning otherwise I wouldn't be able to leave this too, long too annoying review! Did I mention how hot that was?

I'll be dreaming of hot, sexy men and strategically angled shower heads for at least a week after that!! Yummy! Oh! And I know I put my vote in for the sequel already but I'm hoping this is like one of those random ballot boxes they leave on the counter tops in restaurants and gas stations. You know, the kind where they leave the entry forms and a pen lying there and you can fill them out over and over and hope they don't catch you doing it? Okay. Just in case it is kinda like that here's my vote! **pulls out five pound booklet of ballet forms pester stole from the local Quicky Mart** DAVE DAVE DAVE DAVE DAVE DAVE DAVE DAVE DAVE!!!! Okay. You get the point and my hand's getting tired but man I freaking loved this story and I'm waiting for the next one!!! ****glomps Madrachadevvi without mercy*** Later Tator!

wow that was an amazing ending...the smex was really hot!!

“I’ve been to Hell and back,” he said. “But that’s okay, because I’m in Heaven now.”

that was an intense quote and at the perfect time too...yeah Dillon and Seth are together...such a happy ending.
thanks for a wonderful story...you did an awesome job...in response to your question...a story about Dave or Jeremy would be awesome to read...but I think Jeremy's story would be cool to read....but either way you choose, I will read the story...

I can't believe it's almost over, something so wonderful should never end.

Hey! I am a lurkerrrr! But now after the last suspense part, I beg you please update :)

Awww. You just have to love Jeremy, don't you ^^

oh no! i hope nothing bad will happen to dillon!

nice sex :)

by the way, have you ever considered that people would read your story and not leave an review cuz they didn't think of anything to say and would just rather read and leave or something like that? I did that sometimes because I couldn't think of anything to say or just want to read and run...