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concerning chapter 9
Holy sheyat... I did not see that coming... Holy friggin cow..... And i'm not even finished reading it yet..... The cray senile bitch pulled a gun on him, she's a crazy psycho killer?
...... okay that senile crazy bitch thinks she's Dillon's mother...no way... no fudging way

I just finished your story and I thought that it was very sweet. They sure had a lot of ups and downs didn't they, I am glad to see a happy ending. Only one thing drove me crazy, you told US how they knew each other before, but you never had Seth tell Dillon and Dillon never asked. If someone insisted that I knew them I would be going crazy with curiosity trying to figure it out.

As for a side story at first I thought Jeremy, then I realized he is so romantic that it would be alot like this one; so I choose Dave because he seemed outspoken and passionate and that makes for great chemistry.

This story is a diamon among a sea of glasspieces in my oppinion. It's rare to see such feeling and deapth on this site, but this was a pleasant surprise. I really love it. It went rigght up amon my absolute favourites of stories ever read.
I just wanted to let you know that I read and enjoyed your story. I'm not all that good at coming up with why I like a story, but when I really like it like this, its well written, deep, sensetive and with a plot. You managed everything of that in this masterpice.

OMG, what a GREAT, GREAT story!! I am sad that it is over, but I totally enjoyed reading about Dillon and Seth's journey. You have such a way with words, I "felt" what they were feeling, your descriptions were realistic and the characters were deep and not one dimensional. I especially enjoyed Nurse Ratchett! Not really, but still feel sad for her. I am so glad Dillon and Seth found their way back to each other. Dillon is really amazing and Seth should be glad that he is so loyal, even to people who have hurt him tremendously in the past. I don't think I could forgive someone like Brad, but Dillon can see past that and still be his friend. I really LOVED this story and the characters you created. I'd love to read another story, maybe about Sprite (love her! and btw: how come Belinda wasn't at the hosptial when Dillon fell down the stairs?) and Jeremy (I know they can't be together, maybe you could find a guy for her?) Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more from you; you are a great writer! Oh, and before I forget (cause I do that a lot!), thank you for commenting on my reviews before each chapter! It always makes my day to even be mentioned by an author! Thank you!

I don't really care. I'll read whatever you write about either Jeremy or Dave. Good luck!

awwww, how sweet. just finished reading this. Loved it!! : ) perfect ending

OMG, I read the first chapter and got hooked...now that it's 2 in the morning and I've finished I am in awe...this story was so good! It had the perfect balance of romance, drama, and smut. Seth and Dillon are just too cute for words, and I hope that you will write spinoffs with the other characters. Keep up the good work!
CJ

Hi,

I just read your story from the beginning and I really like it.

I like your characters, especially Dillon. Such a sweet guy and I think Seth is perfect for him. I like the plot of this story, not only lovey-dovey but not too much angst for my taste, just the way I like with the happy ending. And the sex, oh yes...

I would like to read more but Jeremy or Dave's story? I really don't know, I can't say which I would like to read more. Or maybe both of their stories if you know what I mean? ;) I have one request, I would love to read a story where other one is The Top and other one The Bottom of the relationship. That would be so hot...

Thank you for this.

xx

that was such sweet ending. I like it :)

I found your story and started reading it and couldn't stop. It was really good and I enjoyed it very much. Rarely do I find a story that captures my imagination and attention all the way through but you have managed to do that with your plot, characterization and execution of this story. I applaud you for this story and you have definitely gained a new reader in me. Thank you again for sharing this. Although I loved Dillion and Seth's story, I hate to see it end but I do look forward to your next story. I found both Jeremy and Rick to be very interesting...even though Rick was only mentioned at the last chapter, the little bit Seth talked about and then actually having him enter the story for a brief moment, totally had me wanting more Rick. But of course Jeremy's character was great through everything so either story (or both...hint hint...together) would be amazing to read. Whatever the case I look forward to reading your next story.