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for Control

by melissarxy1

person Anon
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story! I created an account just so I could review it (not that it takes much effort, but still...). I really like the fact that you are taking such efforts to develop the characters instead of having it be complete smut. I absolutely love Hope's character and the mystery surrounding her. I hope you update soon!
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH I LOVE THISSS!!!
person lovelyl
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon. I really like this vampire story too many are cliché taken too much from Underground, Anne Rice and lately Twilight but your stories are almost original well done. :D
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I love this story! It's fantastic, I can't wait to read more!
person lovelyl
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story and I feel disappoint when the chapter is finished, more please. :D
person lovelyl
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am actually enjoying this story, really pleased to see a update. :D
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it and all the mention of fire potential makes me giggle. It's a good piece and I want to see more =)
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i was waiting and waiting and waiting watching for another chapter then suddenly two hehe.

my my poor little human can't wait for the next chapter.
person lovelyl
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great a update. More please, I really like this story. :)
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a good and interesting story.
But did I miss a chapter? Because something seems to be missing.
Keep up the great work!

BCM