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by Aya

schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 185. Simply put, sensually erotic.
person Shoezies
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, you've answered one question for me in this chapter...I'd always wondered why it was bad for a male Sidhe to masturbate (I figured it would be considered a waste...which lead to me wondering the same thing Mik did about two males being together....ehh *shrugs*) And holy Taln and Koln! That part made me giggle to myself a lot...I could just picture Mik's freaking face *giggles more* As usual, this was a freaking wonderful chapter and I can't wait for more. I do hope that things are getting better on your end! =D *GOLD STAR*
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, Paw's so cute; ready to go again!!! hahahaha Gotta use that Wallbanger again! lol
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whew~ you've definitely got me on this chapter: Leader. How does Taln fit into all this? I've some how missed it XD. And as per discussion thread on AFF forum, I would appreciate it to have a link somewhere at the beginning of the chapters if not in your profile. I would also visit your web page as well. I did notice a misspelling I think. Nope, it's in Sequel, so I'll leave that for the post there. Otherwise, I'd love to know how Taln is Leader and if Koln had something to do with it since he and Souse bedded each other. Or is it because Taln and Koln are linked to progress of Namesake's GameMaster? Oh, the ticking of my mind! Great chapter and I'll be catching up on Sequel now.
person BabyVampy
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic!!!!m I would've never guessed the leader to be Taln! *laughing happily*
person Suryallee
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Confused!
person Shoezies
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! But questions arise for me (what's new with that one, huh? haha) Like why is Taln leader? When was it decided that he was leader? (At least I understand the whole Paw screeching in Sequel and why Rel was confused) And why does Mik think that Muan was so arrogant? Just because he was claiming stuff as his....Maybe he's never had his own actual possessions and he's excited....grrr on Mik for quick judgment
person js
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading "Sequel" without ever having read "Partner." I've skipped to the last 2 chapters of Partner, but I have a feeling I should go back and read all the previous chapters. But 182 chapters is kind of daunting. O_O
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Paw's "Whoot," sounded more human than people. I was wondering if you had intended for that to happen. I'm trying to remember when Paw may have learned to whoot and just remembered that Paw watches television also. So I guess my question would then be, did you intend for Paw to sound human when he whoot, or was that something that came unexpectedly? I can't wait to know more about what Muan and Rel will do with candles later.
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I basically stayed up for the past 3 days reading from chapter one to chapter 183 and i'm finally done! WhoOOooooOooot! Anyways can't wait for more ^__^ oh and Happy New Year!! *throws sparkles at you*