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by Aya

person Kim
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore how you update almost everyday. Bless you. Love the story.
person kayez
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, another boy genius. The problem with genius is that it is side by side with insanity. And the boy Ra may love the world but in his mind what will he do to insure it's survival?
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wait, I thought Taln and Koln were already doing it!!!

And Souse was testing Taln? So all the Sidhe (and Mik) had to sit grounded for 18 hours?????? As a test to Taln's leadership abilities? Boy, I'd be pissed too!
person kaylez24
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor grounded Sidhe. LOL
The male that raped the female seems to have it good. Wonder if he did it on purpose?
Oh and Koln ravage him baby. LMAO
person Shoezies
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“Never poke the quiet one” Paw knows his stuff….Poking the quiet one is very dangerous….very very dangerous…Holy crap, Taln has a major backbone…Grounding the whole tribe like that…I guess they deserve it, seeing as how not a soul kept an eye on Lillow or Hohi
Poor Paw…..No quickie for him…Of course, I agree with Mik….Sidhe don’t seem to be capable of a quickie….
Wonderful chapter as per always….I still stand by my vote….I know that doesn’t exactly help….If things don’t get evened out, what about mixing ideas?
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, seems Mari missed a lot!!! Good for Taln for showing them! Grounding everyone, way to go! I thought for some reason Hohi was older than Taln, but that couldn't be right. Hohi would know better then, then to hook up w/Lillow.

And did Violet get the cookie from Rel and Muan? lol

Ok, I still vote for Mr. Wallbanger. But if you don't want that, how bout anal beads; did they ever use them, I can't remember! Or how about a vibrator or butt plug. I can't remember if they used these toys or not, I'm just throwing stuff out...oh, I know, how about another 3 way w/Souse? He's already half naked w/no undies!!!! lol
person kayez
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Mik and Paw. From the outside people see a diplomat and a revered spiritual leader, and in reality you have two horny males who act like newlyweds. LOL.
person js
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read the next chapter. :) On a side note, I'm the one who didn't begin reading "Partner" until Chapter 183, so I'm sure I've missed a lot. Do you have a good color picture somewhere of what Paw/Mik, Muan/Rel and the others look like? I'm trying to picture them as I read but it's a little difficult. :)
person Surrealtraversity
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of... I thought I was never going to catch up! I started reading this almost a week ago. This story is AMAZING. I absolutely LOVE it. Paw is just hilariously awesome, and Mik is so funny in his... occasionally clueless ways, and Paw... god. They're so cute together, too.

Lillow really DOES act like a teenage girl at times. I guess he is one, though, isn't she? This last chapter certainly showcased that.

I don't even know what to say. I have so much to say, considering I just read over 180 chapters of a story. The fact that there's that many chapters is mind-blowing to me. Fantastic. I applaud you. I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-hops over from Sequel- oh oh! let's have Mik ride and Paw gallop! i leave the creaitivity to you Ayato! *wink*