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for Partner

by Aya

person kylee123
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter 9 and so many developments. it is sad to think that Mik and Paw have been so well matched and poor Essuan was being abused by Alan all this time. The females must be pretty submissive to aggressive males. They need to be able to communicate with the Sidhe. I think the idea of Koln with Essuan is great. Koln is a grump but he seems to care about treating the Sidhe properly. Thanks for the great super fast updates. The story is going great. Paw is adorable. He has stolen my heart. Enjoy your work week and I will be looking forward to your next update.
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be the cutest story ever. I just love how the Sidhe poke people that they like and go "Boop". It's just adorable! Please update soon.
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fuck even I'm confused... Wonder what all that heated discussion with the other Sidhe was all about... Paw, you aren't leaving Mik hanging are you? and I hope Souse's partner survives him lol It's fun to find out about Sidhe customs the way you present them. We're lost and a bit confused and then suddenly it all makes sense, the same way it does for Mik. I really like it.
Great chapter! Hope you can update soon!!
person kylee123
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see this chapter! Paw certainly is an enigma. How come Mik doesn't get to kiss him? Perhaps the kissing ritual shows which role each person plays in the relationship. The interaction between Mik and Paw and Souse is very intriguing. I am glad to see that Mik kind of challenged Souse for getting too friendly with Paw. It is good to see him show some jealousy. It is all too cute. Thanks for the update. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me sad. I usually like being sad, but I am getting ready for bed, and I hate to be sad before bed.
person lijana
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I am enjoying your fic. Paw is certainly cute and seemingly a lot smarter than the humans in this fic make him out to be.
Mik is in some firm denial about his leanings lol I think no het man will blow someone to provide a language lesson ^_______^
I am looking forward to reading the rest and I have a feeling that Mik's plans for flying under the radar are all impossible now and he and Paw are probably gonna end up being emissaries or something ^^

Anyway I look forward to the next installation and some hot action between Paw and Mik
person Rylan McAllister
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing. Amusing. Confusing. Addicting.

More, please.
person kylee123
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's getting hot hot hot! Paw is leading Mik to the bedroom. I like where this is going. I wonder if Paw was getting advice from Em on the art of seduction. Very cute. I can't wait for the next update.
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I just read this entire story in one go and I absolutely adore it.
I loved the last chapter's title - it fit perfectly - and I cursed out loud when I realized that I had reached the end for now. My goodness, I need more of this story! Thanks for writing.
person crazykitty
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow another fast uploads. you´re amazing