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by Aya

person Anon
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God MORE...
person Rosei
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a tragic story filled with cute characters!!! Wow!!!
I like your style!!

Thanks!!!
R
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a riveting story! To learn about other "creatures" for lack of a better word, is amazing. Your concepts are great, highly entertaining. The way Paw learns so quickly from watching tv, esp. the porn channel! That was hysterical! Great job, great story, looking forward to the next update!
person kylee
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the great updates! You are really on a roll. I knew that we would get to meet the humans from Paw's past eventually. Paw has been through so much. I am surprised that the Sidhe were willing to have anything to do with the humans after being abused in the past. The scene where Paw made the nest on the bed was really touching. Also when Mik offered to make a tribe with Paw. I I am glad they finally did it. Hurray! Now Mike needs to get his butt back to bed so they can snuggle. Yes I know. Duty really was calling Mik this time. Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, you are quite the genius when it comes to writing intriguing and possible stories. I commend you, and I'm very much looking forward to another chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
person crazykitty
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE :)
person kylee123
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Major sexual tension! Poor Paw has been wanting a popsicle and Mik forgot the true meaning of the word? Plus it seems Mik was jealous because of Souse's attention to Paw. Especially because Paw had been refusing Mik's kisses. Paw's little telephone moment was very cute. He is like a combination of grown man and teenage boy. If Paw is the dominant type of male, does he expect Mik to be submissive? Maybe Mik put himself in the submissive role by giving Paw a popsicle in the first place. I am so eager to see how it turns out.
person jazz
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story is fun, I'm excited about reading it! So, keep up the good work ;D
The interactions between Paw and Mik are fun, social and language barriers can be used wonderfully in stories and I think you're doing it well. Though I feel a little bad for Mik, in that situation I would be very confused, especially since he doesn't know where he stands with Paw at the moment...can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing the while Sidhe kissing thing means something different than it means to the rest of us. Poor Mik; he's jelous and he doesn't even know it. I hope that I smell another smexy scene coming on. Tastes like Popsicles.
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm still a little confused but I liked the update. Saw Paw is part of threesome? Is it sexual or not? And how does Mik fit in to all this?? Please update soon!!