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by Aya

person kylee
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The military seems to be getting very invasive. I feel like cameras will mean the end to all kinds of fun things like popsicles and living room smex. Unless Mik doesn't mind being a porn star. Maybe they will at least have some privacy in the bedroom. This story feels as if it is just getting started rather than winding down. I will be eager to read the sequel and I am very interested in learning more about the holy man Whisper. He makes me think that there may be hope for the Sidhe to survive if they have a leader.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Paw said smex. Ha! That's funny.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well! Galt wasn't that bad! Far from it actually! And Paw just keeps getting better. I loved the last part of the chapter. Wonder what he's got planned for our dear Mik...
person Passing Reader
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh! I'm gone for the weekend, and when I come back it's to 12 more chapters! Your an updating machine!
Not that I'm complaining, just, wow! This is like every reader's wet dream, decent fiction at a fast and furiouse pace. ^^'
Thanks for updating, I can't wait to see what happends next!
person sugargirl89
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was good up until chapter 17, but I don't like where this is heading, sorry.
person kiix
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. Luving the humor. Loving the tag line. :) Keep the chapters coming. I want a Paw of my own.

Kiix
person drake
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love. this.
paw is just adorable and mik is completely overwhelmed adn i feel like this could be some sort of weird HBO show. can you email me when you update? thanks.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh cliffie. can´t wait for more
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and its very good. Paw did seem to learn very quickly (maybe a touch unrealistically) but that is my only complaint (which is relatively small, if you think about it) other then that, the story is amazing. I cannot wait for the rest to be posted
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee.....what is he going to say to Mik and Paw? I hope nothing terrible. I also hope we get more smex before the end of the story. And you are still the update queen.

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