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by Aya

schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems Mik is starting to take a more active role in his relationship with Paw, or at least a more equal role. Pinning him in the shower and now, I assume, going for the toys. It seems to me like he's really shifted his stance since becoming Paws tribe. I like to see him really caring for Paw.
person kylee123
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this tribe where the pregnant females rule. I want to see Mik's devilish idea.
person kawaii
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ive been reading this story from day one, and I have to say that I LOVE it. it too funny reading the situations between paw and mik and Im finding myself laughing along with the story. thank you for a great read please keep up the good work.
person kylee123
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot chapter! Great smex scene. I don't think Mik could have predicted any of that. I think Paw is growing bolder and sexier every day. He certainly knows how to keep Mik on his toes. I bet Mik now views Paw as his equal in intellect. The people in t"he military will have a good time watching that tape. Love the apartment - very good for encouraging those "natural encounters".
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with Paw. That's pretty much all I have to say about that. He's smexy.
person angel.
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loveeeeeeeeeeeee!
person kylee123
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems that prettiful Mik has a little admirer. Very cute. What is with Essuan smacking Koln upside the head? I guess it shows that she is not afraid of him. Especially after being abused by her previous partner. I am eager to know what Galt has to say to Mik and Paw. Very interesting developments in this chapter.
person Eremi22
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The speed at which you update utterly amazes me.

But that is a very good thing! I am excited to see what the 'toys' will turn out to be!
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Toys? I like the sound of that, and so does Paw, apparently. Such fun. I can't wait to see what these toys consist of.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Toys? Awwww, did Galt go and buy Paw sex toys???? Hahahaha AND put it on camera!!!!! Poor Mik! How come Mik didn't tell Galt that Koln (did I spell that right?) suggested he have sex w/Paw? Looking forward to reading about the new toys? Heehehe