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by Aya

person teeta
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I've been luring around and quietly reading this story and waiting for each chapter with impatience and THANK YOU for such fast updates *gives a hug* And at the same time, sorry I haven't reviewed even once, though I've been enjoying the story so very much. I like your characters, all of them, but of course, Paw steals the spotlight :D I sometimes wish I could understand what he's saying when he chatters and natters in his own language. And I wish I could understand all the gestures he's making, and his race's customs and well, everything concerning Sidhe's.

Will be waiting for more and thanks for the story so far :D

person ReighChama
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter...
went well, the plot is slightly confusing.. or maybe I am skimming? actually not confusing. my bad. espeically if you compare it to namesakes.. now THAT is confusing.

question: Why can't they kiss? like paw kept stopping mik unless paw started it. why? does a kiss show power or somthing?


~carleigh.milton@hotmail.com
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the fact that Mik is slowly becoming more comfortable w/Paw. It was so apparent when Mik went to get the toy and use it on Paw. I can sense he's getting more and more attached to Paw. Can't blame him; I'm in love with Paw too! lol
person kylee
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
After the events of last night and the morning, I would have died of embarassment if I was Mik. To have a room full of people watching my videos. I get the feeling that Mik is somewhat fed up with being scrutinized by the whole group. He was correct though in assessing the situation with Endo and Souse. Perhaps it is just that Mik is fundamentally different from most of the other partners. I hope the others will be able to learn how to communicate as well.
person ReighChama
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am slowly falling in love with paw! <3
sooo adorkable

I wish the chappies were longer, but everything is gone well [ to me] you writing is clear and coherent, your plot is interesting.
I wish there was more smutt... but thats just me =)

Question: Is dude Toln [ fake one] has fake front documents, why is he in the front?
2: So, poachers are killing paws peeps for their teeth, like diamonds [ or elephant trunks?]
3: how did the government get a hold of the 'natives?' the black market? buying at lowest price? found them?

thanks!
person ReighChama
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uuh site monster ate my review... hoping this posts all of it now...
I am slowly falling in love with paw! <3
sooo adorkable

I wish the chappies were longer, but everything is gone well [ to me] you writing is clear and coherent, your plot is interesting.
I wish there was more smutt... but thats just me =)

Question: Is dude Toln [ fake one] has fake front documents, why is he in the front?
2: So, poachers are killing paws peeps for their teeth, like diamonds [ or elephant trunks?]
3: how did the government get a hold of the 'natives?' the black market? buying at lowest price? found them?

thanks!
person Suryallee, not locked in, sorry
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I soo love this!!!
Please continue, it is so lovely and funny^_^
person HumanInfiltator
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely priceless.

Thank You.
person kylee123
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Lots of great info about Paw. i am glad that Paw is having so much fun with the plants. They need to get him some planting materials. It seems that Paw's tribe had special plant tending skills before they became homeless when their forest was destroyed. I am glad to see Paw's special skills come out. Perhaps he has some medicine knowledge. Paw seems to really like the new living space. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Crunchums and munchums. OMG No cure for stupid. life-long disease. Mik has nothing inbetween his ears; only air! Paw is the most adorable creature I have ever read about! Can I have a Paw????? Pretty please?????? He is too funny! They better get those cameras out of the bedroom and pronto! B/C Paw like sex, Mik no sex w/cameras there! hahahaha Great chapters, thx. for the quick updates!