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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really adore this fik!!
I really do! It makes me laugh and think at the same time and it is cleverly written.
I really do! It makes me laugh and think at the same time and it is cleverly written.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be interesting to read about the next 9 months instead of glossing over it. See how Mik struggles with the lang. and have more interaction b/w the sidhe, their partners and each other. Like a sleep over? or poker party with some of the parteners and sidhe. Have more women come into the mix or did the parterns that did not sit with their sidhe wjhen Gault came get a second chance? Love the story can't wait till the next chap.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The pool scene was the best I liked Souse putting Mik in his place and I guess it affected Mik right away too. Interesting. I love the relationship between Mik and Paw and affectionate Mik can be with Paw. It will be interesting to see Paw teach Mik how to speak Sidhe. Please dont skip the next nine months. Please. I want to see Essuan's changing pregnancy and how the others react to it. I also want to see Mik learn some more about the Sidhe and their language. Plus they are all still establishing relationships and learning about each other. I wouldn't mind a Mik-Paw-Souse threesome either.(naughty me) Okay I made my plea. I am sure the story will be great either way. You have to go with your heart since you are the writer.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see more of little Lillow too. She likes Mik so much.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you're feeling better! Good few chapters; very interesting by the pool and the submission thing. I thought for sure Souse was gonna fling Mik into the pool. Actually, that's what I thought Mik was gonna do first, throw Souse into the pool. But in the end it was all good, w/Souse accepting Mik into the "tribe". Also, EXTREMELY interesting how Paw just analyzes Mik's dream and know exactly what Mik's thinking, even when Mik doesn't know. Paw is too smart!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy this story i hope that you continue it cause i enjoy the characters very much.
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am amazed that Souse could talk this entire time. It was probably to his advantage to not let them know so they would be less guarded around him. Did you skip the Mik and Paw wrestling scene on purpose? I never found out who was stronger. Is Souse saying that it is impossible for the Sidhe to interbreed with humans or that he doesn't want the Sidhe to breed with humans? I am looking forward to the next update.
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yaay my question was answered ^_^ even if not meant for me.. thanks! <3
This chapter is seemed like paws verbal skills went down, or was that becuase he was angry? And had Mik not left Paw after sex to go to work before? and the limping questions was not answered.. although obvi during sex ^_^
continue pleeeeease ^_^
This chapter is seemed like paws verbal skills went down, or was that becuase he was angry? And had Mik not left Paw after sex to go to work before? and the limping questions was not answered.. although obvi during sex ^_^
continue pleeeeease ^_^
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The site monster ate the other part of my review =(
This chapter is seemed like paws verbal skills went down, or was that becuase he was angry? And had Mik not left Paw after sex to go to work before? and the limping questions was not answered.. although obvi during sex ^_^
continue pleeeeease ^_^
This chapter is seemed like paws verbal skills went down, or was that becuase he was angry? And had Mik not left Paw after sex to go to work before? and the limping questions was not answered.. although obvi during sex ^_^
continue pleeeeease ^_^
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Two hours? OMG! Very very hot and very cute too. Paw was cute. He always is. More please!