rate_review Reviews

I really like this story! It's not exactly my usual cup of tea, but I still like it. I like Souse so much more now that he can talk! But of course Paw and Mik are still my favorite. Can't wait til the museum trip! I would typically say, "write more please", but you seem to have that completely under control, so, thanks!

aww cute chapter, is mik jealous?

Another cute chapter if I dare say so. Paw is hiding behind Mik at one moment and ignoring him the next AND playing with the new people. It was good to give the prospective partners a little preview of Sidhe behavior. I am surprised most of them did not run away after Koln and Mik's scary speech. I see your description debate. I think it works to be minimal on description. You tend to slip them in when necessary. Chapter 28 at the pool was informative about Lillow and Essuan. Perhaps this is how Mik tends to look at the world. He notices these details when they become necessary. I think it is in keeping with his character. Mika and Paw really serve the publicity function for the program because they are so cute and funny together. I can just picture Paw in the elevator. Love it.

Yay! I am locked in this time, smirks^^
*...I've heard a few comments about Paw seeming a bit immature, but loveable. Paw seems to like being a comedian, he likes making people laugh. And he likes speaking improperly, just to see if he could confuse Mik or others....*
You wrote this in one of the two new chapters, 31 I think.
Actually I got the impression that he is very clever instead...and a little more dangerous as I first thought. He struck my like the sneaky and playing a mask game, type. But never as cuddly or harmless...shakes head...could be wrong here but I don't think so^^!
I mean, he was a tribe leader for heavens sake: how could he have been if being just immature and harmless?
I really liked chapter 32...it gives a new sight on several things happening and I like the way Souse and Essuan's family troubles seem to come out into the open. I already suspected that there was something going on but I am still in the dark of what exactly it is...she obviously loves him but sure is a hell of a strong chara herself.
Mik, well, I think Paw is a little more he can handle, plus, his constant dominance problems show this time quite good.

Against Souse, he is slowly getting a hang on what he has to do, but Koln was unknowingly put in place? Or did I saw a ghost here? I mean, to me it looked as if Mik unknowingly put himself over Koln? At least that's my humble impression this time^^
Suryallee

Dang! Mik has another girl chasing him now. I think it is hilarious that they all think he is cute. The new girl has the power to sense his thoughts? Thats quite the powerful skill.

I love your story! The originality, the relationships, the characters, and the fascinating world you have created!

I like your story but, you need descriptions. I have no idea what color the Sidhe's hair or eyes are. Or how long the character's hair is. When you write a story you are painting a verbal picture. Though you know what your character looks like other people don't. It would be most helpful if you were more descriptive of the characters looks. Again this is a very enjoyable story but, I would like to know what the characters look like.

I don't agree with the anonymous comment above...points somewhere up the line of comments over hers...maybe you gave out no actual color and frame descriptions but I for once, do not mind because it makes the mind get sucked into the story even more! I like that, it makes a story interesting and unusual and to judge from all the reviews you get and all the ratings: I would conclude that the story is not only fascinating me like this^^
I had to get used to it too, at first. now it does not concern me anymore, it is rather more captivating for me to riddle their personalities out now as to muse about their looks...come to think about it: they all are very unique to me and I love their interactions and verbal reactions to each other all the time!
Its a real study of psychology in some parts of it and/ or emotional reaction chains taking their course with one single detail happening...or not! Really cleverly written, indeed! I wish I could write out my own Naga charas interactions in my own fictional story here as well as you do it all the time...I have true troubles with that problem all the time.
Please continue with this wonderful story, it deserves to be written further and honestly told: I burn to find out what happens next^_^
I will come back to read, thats certain, I love this and just wanted to congratulate you to an awesome story,
Suryallee

Wow! This is quite an epic and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to see how this story will unfold. Also, love the way you have gradually allowed the Sidhe to be much more intelligent than first thought by most people. Excellent!

Paw is very cute. He is like a combination of genius and little boy at the same time. The info about the Sidhe-people cross is interesting when you think about the female Sidhe who have male partners. Essuan could have been impregnated by Alan if she was not rescued. it makes me wonder if the Sidhe would accept such a child in the present.