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by Aya

schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not like to wood in Mik's pants!!!!! Hahahah Paw has a sense of humor!!!!!!! Yay Paw! Even funnier than ass burgers! When I first read that, I was like, burgers in his ass???????? Ew. Paw a funny guy! And yes, I was gonna comment on his pronounciation of aspergers, but I wanted to finish both chapters first.
person kylee123
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The last three chapters were great. The scene with Essuan stealing the salad was especially funny. So Paw definitely has some serious psychic abilities. It was funny to see how long it took Paw to discover the rock and the wood. I hope that he does get to meet Mik's mother (and maybe Jay secretly) eventually.
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm SOOOO glad Mik is back!!!! How cute was Paw? I was in tears when they said they ayata'd each other! Oh and I forgot to review when Mik was w/his mom, how cool is she, right? Anyway, loved the chapter; so glad they're back together!
person kylee
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happiness! Thanks for the lovely love scene. MIk's garden arrangement skills are coming out now? Spending time with his Mom was a good thing. I like the ending with them crawling into a Paw-built nest together Very sweet. Welcome home Mik!
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's amazing! There's a Sidhe in the machine???? It's so weird; I read a story on here awhile back about a person being used as the engine in a car! So, Sidhe in the MRI machine, wild! So, w/the Sidhe, if their reasoning and most of their brain activity is in part of the brain where humans don't have much activity (except for autistic people), their brains shouldn't be the same as humans anyway, right? There should be differences; maybe their autism activity is on the opposite side of the human's brain. Anyway, very interesting thoughts. Good chapter.
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story, and i'm definitely looking forward to reading more of it when you update. :D
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, Mik ayata Paw! I know Paw feels the same for Mik too! Maybe when Mik gets back he can tell Paw how he feels... Oh, does Paw's mom know that Jay is a Sidhe? Does she even know what Sidhe are?
person kylee
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww. I miss Paw too. Absence really does make the heart grow fonder. I can't wait for them to be together again. Two weeks is a long time to be separated from your partner.
person Kylee
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So sweet! Pretty please let there be a reunion love scene.
person Avernion
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww :'3