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person hawthorne
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Psychometry
its a semi common ability but is current to this world... as in: x men comics
Longshot has the psionic ability of psychometry enabling him to psionically "read" the recent memories of a person by making physical contact with him or her. He also is sensitive to "hearing" the voices of spirits of the dead (clairaudience). Moreover, Longshot can read "psychic imprints" that people leave on objects that they have handled, and thereby learn the thoughts that an individual had while handling the object. Longshot, in the present, can sometimes even look into the future of the person or object he touches, and can read the thoughts that that person will have when handling it in that future time.
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No lube? Ouch.
person hawthorne
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“Paw thinks Paw likes Mik’s mother.” ... no mother in lawissues here! =D
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love this line....
“Wes not whores Mik. Only people would trade sex for something more than the pleasure of a body and a mind.”
person hawthorne
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dna.... im starting to like kolh and mik relationship
person Avernion
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Daddy Jay. Giggles.
person kylee123
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for you! You get first prize and cookies too. Four awesome chapters! The chapters leading up to the threesome was so funny I was rolling on the floor. The threesome was hot, aggressive, super awesome. You did a great job. I have to say that Mik, Paw and Souse make an fabulous sexy trio. I would love to see more. Poor Mik and his sore body parts. I see that Jay is getting interested in the group. Very interesting. I can't wait to see how that goes. It will be good for the people in the program to meet Sidhe who are living freely in the real world.
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The last part made me laugh madly!
*Uncle* Jay, priceless! And mik freaking out like he did when hearing the news...loved this chapter!
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHHH, poor Mik, I guess he doesn't know what he's in for!!!!! LOL
person Avernion
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new chapter. The talking finger is a bit freaky :S How can Paw hear it? What the heck is up with their brains?
Love tha story