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for Partner

by Aya

person hawthorne
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW HAWT!!
just read 3some... now off to bed myself
person teeta
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello again and a quick answer to your question. As to me, I'd prefer to wait until the character is introduced in the main story, it creates more suspence, and it's more interesting to see how things develop on the spot.

And thanks for the story so far :) I'm enjoying it immensely :)

teeta
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, lets wait with the introduction! ;) More fun that way.
Thank you for the story! You have created an interesting world
and loveable complex characters. I enjoyed reading every chapter and can't wait for the next one!
Jay...so many questions indeed. :D
person heart89
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wait until they come into the story. So then when he does enter we can then learn about him and it allows for more suspense
person Suryallee
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would say now then. seems it would explain more things^^
person Avernion
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, good question. In general, I like to have the first on finished of befor the second one starts, or to have the two in one. Still, there are exceptions right. If you have thought about it and as the author feels the best way to conway the story is to write about this person's history in another story, that is probably the best way. It might be good to know him when he shows up. It could be very interesting to see him grow in the current story Partner. Lol, I just don't want your focus to be slipt ^-^ You've spoilde me so much with these fast updates that I would suffer if they slowed. SUFFER! ;P
person hawthorne
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehe I just love how Mik and jay react! its priceless!
person hawthorne
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the answer is do as you are most comfort with ... you are the writer... if you have to write the sequel now... if it wants to be writen DO IT1 if it can wait so can we
I think every1 is enjoying your writing and we are gonna be reading everything anyways
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would want MC introduced in this story. I think it would be more interesting to start reading the sequel when I know a little bit about the character from the Partner storyline.
person kylee
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Koln is on the trail. Think fast Mik. He needs to come up with a good explanation before Koln puts two and two together. I don't know why they need to manage Paw's internal clock. It makes me wonder what else they tried with him while Mik was away. My vote is that you start the sequel now. I don't like the part where you say everyone will want to kill you. As long as in the end you can read each story separately I think it should work great.