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the last 5 or 6 chapters have sent me for a loop... ive been reading without reviewin b/c ive needed to process
im like eating without chewing... i need more info to make it all make sense
so i rush to the next chapter
but now there isnt one
yet

Yes me again, makes herself small, forgot your question in 56
Its chapter 19^^
Do I get a bonus cookie Now?

Wow, gets more confusing each time I read! I did love the part where Koln would "jump Souse's bones" if he ever looked at him! hahah And a few chapters back, when Paw ate too much; that was really funny! Poor Mik had to shave in the kitchen! lol

But, so what Souse was saying is that Paw is one of the Sidhe chosen to be a Whisper? Does Paw know that? I couldn't remember if Paw fell asleep at that point...and is Paw a healer? So many questions....

Very, very good. I'm hopelessly attached to this story. I can't choose one character over the other. Not until Paw threatened to do to Mik what he did to the phone that one time. You have me wondering what's so special about Mik. It is sounding like Paw or Whisper has engineered all this. What is his motivation? Is it really the influence of gods/goddesses?

Jay disappointed me a bit in not allowing the program to grow. Doesn't he want all the Sidhe safe? His intentions are a little obscure. I'm not ready for him to be a bad guy though it looks like he has the potential to be one.

Please don't let my review influence the story. This is just what I've gotten out of it. Obviously it's good. It's held my attention throughout. I like stories that aren't entirely explained. I won't pester about the ending; I don't want to jinx it. I don't see this story ending anytime soon. In fact, there could be several sequels and spinoffs.

Yes, very nice job indeed. Keep it up. =)

Ugh! First of, I think mik is in for deep trouble with his Paw^^; Way to go , mik...however...munch...munch...hmmm virtual delicacy tasty^___-
You got confused again, with this chapter...some makes sense and some are new bits from you for the future, I am sure! So, no questions from me this time(Is still analyzing chapter, grins^^)
I wasn't sure if she was Herla she. Hope I wrote her name right...how ever, I somehow fell in love with Kolns amusing comment about Souse...somehow I think he should better not much for that! Could be a little more as the poor man can handle, lol
With Una I meant maybe something similarly to his status/Power...makes that any sense? Well, seems I was wrong in that anyways and Jay; Ok, but he really acted lots like that, ROFL.
To bad he is not able to get children though(Not with mikes mom! I mean generally) Sounds he really wanted that from what I read through the lines...however I will shut up and let you write^^

Was that Jay's imitation of a human hand kiss? Is confused, or am I mistaken?
Sorry if I confuse you here, I don't know how that is called in English(Is German)

Wow, what a nightmare! Mik's not a half-breed, right? It was kinda confusing; he was dreaming HE was the half-breed?

Poor Paw... Anyway, love this story, please keep it up...although get some sleep first!

Im not sure what to think of Jay, but I don't think I like him. I can't quite figure out his motives. I'm also really I terested to see what comes of this nightmare thing. And I'm still loving the relationship between Mik and Paw.

battered... poor Paw... is so upset... but he wasnt hurtin mik... so the others should of backed off

and yes... (me) hawthorne is reading Namesakes. so beembarassed... its noyt bad... abit confusing... but Im enjoyin it

dont complain... I dont get any readers of my story.. ah well I quite lost the erge to finish it long ago... i had a friend who was into that sort of thing and he was keeping me inspired... but we lost touch