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I think it is so sweet that Souse's tribe came over to take care of Mik. Imagine one leaf causing so much trouble. It shows that they really do think about him as part of the tribe. Chapter 62 was funny with Mik's acid trip wearing all the Sidhe out. I bet they wont be giving him any more drugs.

Im really loving this fic. Sorry i havnt reviewed for a while. Erm in a past chapter u mentioned that Koln would jump Souse' bones if given the chance, is there a possibility of this happening, it would be hot! Keep up the good work. x

Thanks for the explanation^^
O.O Souse being a caring *father* figure? Well thats something...he made me giggle and grin.
If he acts more like that I am going to steal him for a few hours, lol...or do I put him into the bed of someone else?
Naa, not really but this shows a great deal of how much he cares even never showing it much in normal times^:^
Thanks for the update, and take your needed time, sometimes one needs it to do so^_-

Wow, Souse was being rather affectionate and motherly. I never saw him like that. He was caring. Wow, another facet to his character. Hopefully Mik will feel better soon. Now, is Paw sick also? I know he was sleeping next to Mik, but wasn't sure if he was sick or not. After all, the Sidhe are used to eating those leaves right? The only reason Mik got sick was b/c humans don't eat leaves, right?

61 uh oh... are Paw and the other sidhe going to go live?

being a candidate for Whisper... or even whisper doesnt sound fun... not when you cant have good sex b/c of memories of bad sex... been there done that,.. its not fun

Mikkums!!!!!!! Sorry that was just too cute. =)

Lol! This made me giggle too xD

I have to say that I keep checking this story every day for updates. It is increadible! There are so many characters yet you put them across so that we understand each of them, they aren't just there and getting in the way! It's brilliant! Have you thought about getting this published? When it's finished of course. There are lots of books I have read that are shorter than this and a lot less in depth but they are still books and the authors are still making money from it. Try looking up Dreamspinner Press maybe, or there's Shadowfire press I think it's called. There's also Aston or something like that, I forget. loose-id.com is another place that does books. The problem is that I don't know how you get to ask to be an author for them. I know some people write for the pure joy of writing but I think other people would like to read this story and this is just another way to make your fiction get to them.

Still, I love this story so much. Mik and Paw are fantastic, the plot is nigh impossible to guess and there are all these little twists that when they arrive you hit yourself for not recognising the signs earlier, but when you were reading the story they weren't hints to you at all. This is remarkably written and I can't really praise you any more for it! I love it. I look forward to your next update.

Jules

I have a question, comes a little late though, Jay said, nine months...
“And in nine months?” Galt growled.
“We will see where you are, and what more needs be done.”

In your other fik, sidhe go into head(Female ones drag males into it?) did I get that right? One a year. So, my question is;
Does that has something to do with Jay's strange comment in the end? Or was that just my overactive imagination again.
The last chapters were simply awesome! The got me thinking. I had to read them over and over again to make a sense in them and out of the different meanings...I mean the spoken ones and the unspoken ones...grrr! You really have a knack for it to sent me on a goose chase! Glares at the face in her mirror. Normally I am not so slow .