rate_review Reviews

Nest.... ahhhhh pooor Mik... but he has a wonderful caring tribe... wish I had someone to care for me when i was that sick

It's very interesting. Can't say I get what just happened, but it is very interesting :3

Oki, lets see if I got it right...
62, Koln and mike figure out that Souse is inbetween to be challenged in the future from others of his tribe and so, Essuan and the other higher Sidhe and their partners were in danger too? Did I get that right? And that it finally concluded into the actual challenge of Souse in 63/64? He walked to that line to give them an opportunity to strike and get it out of the system...man, Souse had guts!
The other pregnant female, is she from Souse tribe or from Violets?
Speaking of, could it be that Violet still wants mik? Looks so to me a little...I just wonder why.
Mik and his punishment...was he now sat in the corner, for kicking the one who attacked Essuan, for interfering with Souse chosen fight, or for helping Essuan? I di not fully understand it...sorry ^^;
All else...this were 3 awesome new chapters^_^
One question is really bothering me...
It is about Whisper's Illness...the symptoms you gave, remind me awfully a lot on the symptoms of a nuklear / atomar sickness. UUnderstood what I mean, found no better wording, sorry for that.
It made me think, you know...wasting could mean many things, and the skin peeling off?

“Children,” Lillow exclaimed, “behave. Dun make Lillow come over there.”
LOL!

That was funny at the end when Mik and Koln are acting like little kids deciding who's gonna touch the "poison". And Souse and Lillow calling them children. That was amusing. But, how could a sprout turn into an old time tree? And the past chapter was cute when Koln decided he need to share Mik's time out w/him. Question: by Souse's tribe booping Mik and Koln, does that mean that they, well, Mik in particular, is forgiven and they accept him again?

“Let the adults talk,” Souse patted Mik and Koln’s heads, “then we will discuss with you.”
LOL i love that line lol "let the Sidhe talk and we'll talk to you idiot people later" lol i love this story and it seems like these chapters would take forever to write what with all the different ideas, but you say it talks you 10-15 minutes and my jaw drops lol it'd take me an hour just to think of their names! (which is exactly why im not the writer here) anyways i love the story even though at some points i can't hardly make sense of it but after rereading a few times i get it lol anyways keep up the good work pleaaaase!! :)

XD Oh dear, I love Souse. I really REALLY love Souse XD

I had a whole friggen review and it didn't take. Damn it! Ok, Reader's Digest version: Interesting about Mik talking w/Lillow and speaking Sidhe! The only typo I noticed in the last chapter and this chapter is dieing; there is no such word: it's dying. Same as lying. Anyway, you write really good chapters in 5 minutes! lol

And once again, it's geting more complicated. Lords, I love this story!

So, Mik's in time out and Souse came to his rescue? Did I read that right? Three males from SOUSE'S tribe jumped Mik and Souse came to his rescue? And Paw of course. But Mik wasn't supposed to show dominance by kicking the third male? That's why he's in time out? Interesting...why did the males from Souse's tribe want to fight Mik?

It's weird about your word processor; I didn't even know dieing was a word! It's definitely dying, w/o a doubt!