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person Suryallee
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Laughs at the last sentence...lol that was funny^_^
person kylee123
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think my heart can take it if anything bad happens to Paw.
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I so wasn't upset with you for not using my idea for that scene! I thought what you did was hot hot hot! And i was just saying I thought it was hilarious the way you worked my idea in later. Really novel. Loved it. Sorry if I came off the wrong way!
person kylee
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a trip for Mik! Very interesting chapter. Mik is becoming part of the Sidhe everyday. He truly is becoming more a part of the tribe. Now that he has some knowledge he is realizing that he has just touched the tip of the iceberg when it comes to being a part of the Sidhe. Paw it seems has always been somewhat of a shaman.
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow 81 chapters!!! i havent reveiwed for a bit... but been reading... Im eating it up...
person kylee
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HaHa! You would think Mik would know better than to eat another leaf.
person -xyz-
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HI,

I found this story yesterday and finished it today. Totally forgot a doctor`s appointment.

This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo fantastic. please continue.

This story is one of the few gems, the reason you wade through all the crazy stories on net
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so now I know how Paw gets the toys. But....why would Koln tell Paw about Souse? Paw is blackmailing Koln? Is Paw really gonna come thru for Koln and get Souse to "bone" him? And ok, I am "toy" challenged; if the end of this Wallbanger toy is a suction cup, then how do both ends go into each person? Just curious.......
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I should Google it....