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LeGasp! Oh no D8

Wow...Paw can be really scary sometimes...two cultures clash here or what?
From a human point of viuw his seeing breeding and all is very harsh! A philosophical question of life and what can live?
But then again, it was awaitable...they always talk of good blood and bad blood...and then there is his brother and all...
Hard chapter to read.

Uhmm...me once more, sorry, in *Implications* the Boy King....that wasn't surprisingly the First Vampyre Paw spoke about to Mik when telling him that they had dug him out and put on public view?

“Wait a minute.” Mik muttered, hopping off the counter as he gave Lillow a look, “You planned this.”

“Uh-oh, lookit time, hear Tuhn calling. BYES!” Lillow ran from the apartment
“On accident!” Mik protested, “It was on accident and she manipulated me! It’s not my fault that your women are twice as crazy as people women.”

WHACK.

...Laughs that hard that she has tears in her eyes Muahahahah!

Very funny chapter. Lillow has been fond of Mik from the beginning. Now she has a pair of adults to teach her every thing she was ever curious about. Having a daughter is going to bbe very interesting for Mik and Paw

Unbelievably funny! Awesome. Mik and Paw have a daughter, a teenage, hormonal, horny daughter. *cackling with delight* I can't wait for more. This has to be my favorite chapter.

Lillow, the watcher. Mik, the sufferer. Paw, the internet-finder.
Mik - I understand how you must suffer xD

I have a few questions about the story. Why would Souse and Essaun not want to adopt Lillow? And why would Lillow want to be adopted by Mik and Paw? How old is Hohi, Lillow's boyfriend? Your story is a good read. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Wonderful last chapies^
One thing struck me in the end, Mik did remind me a second on the thoughts, Una had, he was studying the Sidhe in a way, made me giggle. I mean not that Mike study them, just that both had similarities that moment, in the end of the last chapter (81)
And yet, they have none with each other...however, this chapter confused me at first.
-Please correct me if I am wrong but as I see it; The tribe has a conciseness mind? That exists of all individuals and none at all? Does sidhe can enter and leave this overall collective *mind* whenever they need or want it? I hope I phrased it right, I am not certain, sorry.
And that, Paw, is actually constantly living inside this kind of collective mind, or sphere?
-Koln. He was shortly part of it or was that just Mik, wandering off, so to speak and by that he somewhat brushed Koln's mind?
-Can it be that this...experience of Mik seeing this (Whatever it was, I tendency to call it a kind of Mind reading but I am not certain if it isn't also a kind of empathy too...) was seen out of different perspectives/Minds eyes sometimes? Violet was clear, but I got the expression when reading what you wrote that it wasn't always him only who was thinking one minute...get what I try to say?
-Poor Mik, seems the sidhe have had their own kind of entertainment that night when the three were together, humm?

Yay, Souse is back. Poor Koln, things are never easy for him are they. And things seems to be tuff for Mik as well. Nice chapter by the way!