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87. heat.... I dont even know if these comments are of any use to you... ive slipped so far behind your writing... but hey Id can understand you forgetting who is partnered with whom... you need a flow chart! lol

you are one amazing writer. THANK YOU

I can't believe you left it like that!!!!! Wait....we're not gonna "see" the porn and the foreplay???? Damn you!!!! Just kidding. But seriously, I wanna hear about the porn. And porn does have foreplay actually. Not that I would know, just from what I've been told or read about. Yeah. Right. So anyway, In my perverted mind, I think that Mik (once he's better of course),Paw, AND Koln, ohhh, maybe even Taln, should show Souse what popsicles are all 'bout! Ok, back to reality, just a thought.......

OMG, I just finished reviewing the foreplay chapter and realized you updated already! Yay!

Does this mean that Mik and Paw are gonna be separated? I hope not. They will be miserable w/o each other. And what happend w/the computers? I didn't follow that completely. Was Paw "stealing" the computes and hacking in and reading emails and such, so he knew what was going to happen? What will Koln do now that he's not in charge? And more importantly: will he and Souse EVER get together?????? Ok, stop w/my perverted mind; but inquiring (perverted) minds want to know!!!! Damn it!!!!








(j/k) not really no








and I know about the pen and paper thing; it sucks, especially when you're mind is racing and your hands can't keep up!!

Laugh. I loved this line; “Mik is not horny,” Ashun snapped at the woman, “Mik kind and sweet and stupid. But not horny.”
It's not really a compliment right, lol.

Ah, that was so sweet :'3
You want to leave with a cliffy? You evil you ;)

i dont like mari so far she's my least favorite character.

Okay, you got your cliffy. Evil ;P

Ok, now I know from reading Sequel, the Rel's attorney is Rahluen (I know I screwed up the spelling, sorry). So, based on Paw's explanation, Rahluens are in charge of the porno industry for the Sidhe. Interesting. I am glad tho, that Mik and Paw are "together" again! I feel bad for Koln tho; why was he such a bad leader?