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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Paw is so cute: so much sex that everyone complain no one is walking straight! Hahaha Too bad he didn't sound so excited the Wallbanger was in!
So, did Souse punish Paw? What did Paw do? I don't remember. And why does Souse use violence to punish?
So, did Souse punish Paw? What did Paw do? I don't remember. And why does Souse use violence to punish?
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Read, review and enjoy", hahaha, lol!
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Paw fixed himself a new one? Wow. he's going to get into a whole deal of trouble for that. He used to be a leader. He knows what it means to follow the rules, or not to. Is Paw unhappy? He seems to have changes so much. Is there something that firghtens him? Angers him? Other then the things we already know. I mean, something's going on. I just want to know what it is T-T
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'll tell you: my mouth gaped open at what Souse said about having his way w/Paw! He has a people sense of humor!!!!
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I should probably not tell you how much time I just spent catching up this story (or how devastated I was when I realized that I had gotten as far as you had written and would have to WAIT until you updated again.)
Your world is extraordinarily detailed and that's just the parts on the page rather than the stuff in your head. I love the Sidhe and how intricately you've put them together - they are clearly not human and yet so relatable and fun to work with. Paw and Mik are fantastic and I adore them.
I can't really review 100 chapters all at once and pick out what I loved and when I was completely and utterly confused (which did happen a few times), but overall I had a great time reading this and hope you update soon...though I must admit, I'm not that worried.
Random question - Are Mik and Paw incarnations of Rava and Ayato respectively? (yes, I read that fic too when I realized I'd run out of chapters on this one...review for that forthcoming) I mean, I'm not sure...it's possible, but I don't know how likely it is. I figured I'd ask, though.
Thanks again, for writing such a wonderful story!
Your world is extraordinarily detailed and that's just the parts on the page rather than the stuff in your head. I love the Sidhe and how intricately you've put them together - they are clearly not human and yet so relatable and fun to work with. Paw and Mik are fantastic and I adore them.
I can't really review 100 chapters all at once and pick out what I loved and when I was completely and utterly confused (which did happen a few times), but overall I had a great time reading this and hope you update soon...though I must admit, I'm not that worried.
Random question - Are Mik and Paw incarnations of Rava and Ayato respectively? (yes, I read that fic too when I realized I'd run out of chapters on this one...review for that forthcoming) I mean, I'm not sure...it's possible, but I don't know how likely it is. I figured I'd ask, though.
Thanks again, for writing such a wonderful story!
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Rofl's herself away...I apologize for putting bad and naughty thoughts in other heads...naww, not really^^
Poor, Poor Whisper...I really like that old guy. I hate to see his suffering...so sad.
Mik as a leader...well...I cannot think other as he is maybe better suited in that as he thinks that he is...however, have a nice day^^
Poor, Poor Whisper...I really like that old guy. I hate to see his suffering...so sad.
Mik as a leader...well...I cannot think other as he is maybe better suited in that as he thinks that he is...however, have a nice day^^
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, why would anyone think Mik is screwing around on Paw??? Didn't see that one coming! Ok, so now Paw got disciplined by Whisper in Mik's dream. Could this be a "true" dream? So Paw will be Paw again. Good, I miss the old Paw! I love Paw-speak!
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
97 people ... pooor Lillow. mustard gas is horrid... its up there in the top 10 horrid things humans have unleashed on other humans... completely nasty!.. I feel sorry for paw too... he has changed so much
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sniff. Paw? What's happening to you? T-T
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Paw seems to have real issues with his personality huh?
But what do they all expect, I wouldn't want to stand under all the strain he is currently under. Still, he needs to re-think his actions of late fast, or he will have real issues with himself and his relationship with Mik in the future. Though I still don't like Mari I could respect her in the last two chapters...there are too many questions she evokes in my brain.
To the Koln/Sousse thing...sad but I can understand. If it doesn't fits the story it is hard to insert something that does not fit. even if your readers want it...it is still your story^^
Question: and if you put it up as a oneshot? I know...I am hopeless^^; ^^; ^^; sorry!
Oh, and happy 30,000 hits^^ May your wonderful story get another 30,000 soon!
But what do they all expect, I wouldn't want to stand under all the strain he is currently under. Still, he needs to re-think his actions of late fast, or he will have real issues with himself and his relationship with Mik in the future. Though I still don't like Mari I could respect her in the last two chapters...there are too many questions she evokes in my brain.
To the Koln/Sousse thing...sad but I can understand. If it doesn't fits the story it is hard to insert something that does not fit. even if your readers want it...it is still your story^^
Question: and if you put it up as a oneshot? I know...I am hopeless^^; ^^; ^^; sorry!
Oh, and happy 30,000 hits^^ May your wonderful story get another 30,000 soon!