rate_review Reviews

I hope you're feeling better. You wrote really well for someone who's sick!


Short but sweet. Thank you for the visual on the wallbanger; I really had no clue how it was used! Seriously!

It took 30 chapters for the wallbanger to appear! Finally! :P

Hi! I've just found the story recently (like yesterday), had some time off, and was able to read through all of the wonderful chapters of this great story. I don't think I can express how much I really love the characters and how much of a great job you've done to get the readers to be emotionally invested in them. Everything is so wonderfully done, although there can always be more pr0n! :P Just kidding, well sorta. ;) But really, your mix of plot and smut is awesome and really helps push the plot forward. I'm not sure how much more you're planning on writing for this series since you already have a sequel out, but I will be genuinely saddened when this story comes to an end. I'll probably even end up re-reading more than just the smut parts. :D Well, I'm going to go and check out the rest of the stories on your profile! Take care and have fun writing the next chapter!

when are you going to finish your other works so i can read them and know the endings? ):

God, where have I been? I missed the whole Fever chapter. What happened to Paw? And now in the next chapter, Souse was being so nice and helpful to Mik, btw, Mik falls asleep, trying to find what mind Paw went into? I hope Paw's fever breaks soon, who knows what will happen if Mik's mind is trying to find him!

Well I tried ti leave one but I always caught the uot time of affn when they safe the new stories per day^^

Grab some clothes and meet him in shower: clothes for what?! Hahahah So, Paw was in minds of Sidhe and people. And Souse, by using Mik, pushed him back to reality. IDK why I always thought Souse knew that Paw was really Auhi (did I spell that right?) and not Paw. I thought he knew he killed Paw's brother. Oh, and btw: I did review the last 2 chapters!

Lol, I loved the 'Your'e. Joking. Right?' Ha ha ha. And Paw is so tricky. Very tricky.

Ok, now what?
As I understand it, Paw suddenly isn't Whispers heir? I am confused to say at last, because all was pointing into exactly that direction and still is. But now Paw says he is not? Or has that something to do with his name/ names? I mean the dead brother thing and his real name, Auhi. I give it, I am somewhat thrown now out of the loop.

Oh. My. Bajeezus. This story is AMAZING!!!!. . . . I just started reading this today and right now its 7 minutes to 1:00am and I'm only on chapter 51. . . . And I don't want to stop. . . . But I am SOOO tired. . . . Damn you Ayato for making this story so friggin' awesome. . . . Damn you. . . . . *stumbles off to bed*

Great chapter. Poor Paw. Who will be the new leader?