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by Aya

schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! You did answer my question! Now I have another question! lol Why did Essuan NOT want Paw to take care of one of the babies b/c of his age? She said Paw's barely able to take care of himself (as Mik said the same about himself) I thought Paw was like 42, reeeallllyyyyy ooollllldddd, hahahah! But seriously, I thought they said he was 42, so he's not a spring chicken!

On another note: could I have a Sidhe baby? Sleeps thru the night, never cries, sounds good to me!

But, why did Mik say that Sidhe babies look just like people babies, genitilia and all? I thought Sidhe babies' genitals weren't developed until the age of 5, or did I misunderstand? That's why they can't name them; b/c they didn't have a gender yet. Right?

schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny! Koln's really good at translating Essuan! His whole speech was hysterical! And having been pregnant 3 times, Essuan was right.

I'm kinda confused tho: why is it that Mik and Paw are getting the baby (babies)? Just b/c Paw "donated" the sperm? I thought Essuan and Koln would raise the baby (babies).
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Paw was so funny: 16 yrs. not 'loud to touch child. Pedo. Bad. (I know I didn't get it all) Very funny!

So, when Sidhe are born the genitals aren't pronounced yet? It takes five years to see the gender? That's so strange.
person Suryallee
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, wasn't online for a while^^! Sorry!
Hah! I am so glad I assumed right^^ Well, for one think; Didn't you say that sidhe only get twins when Illuva wants them to get some?
I think I read something about that before...
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!!! love love love love!! ur story omg i can't wait to read more
person Suryallee
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mari: ROFL!
Pet...hits souse over the head...now really!
person Mezzer52
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BABIES!!! Exciting! I can't wait to see how this turns out. I hope both babies end up surviving because parental scenes of Mik and Paw would be absolutely adorable and hilarious to read. Thanks for the plethora of updates, I enjoyed each one! You seem to spoil us readers every Sunday. I'm not complaining though! Take care and have fun with your writing!
person Mezzer52
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sighs*

The stupid site just ate my review!!! ugh. And I can't remember everything I said either. I think I better start typing out these reviews in a word document first or something because this is probably the 4th or 5th time this has happened.

Nonetheless, just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed this scene and could not tell you which part was my favorite. I love the juxtaposition of the scenes and their passion/lust of the bedroom and their romance/love of the bathtub. It was absolutely wonderful. You have a gift of being able to balance the sex and plot in this story, that so few authors on this site possesses. I really do treasure this story and I hope that you will never abandon it. I don't mind the times between updates, as long as an update is eventually going to come until the story reaches its end. Thanks again for the update, and I can't wait for the next one. Take care and have fun writing the next chapter!
person yunasgrace
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW ive finally caught up my reading with your updating XD
i love this story so much that i actually have read all 118 chapters in just under 2 days but now im upset that i read that fast as i now have no new chapters to read XDD

My fav characters have to be Paw, Mik, Essuan and Souse. I just love it when Souse shows that he aint just the dominant male but that hes also has a submissive side (love the spousal abuse xD)

Mik is a lovable idiot XD
and Paw is just...well...Paw xD
At first i wasnt that keen on Essuan but as the story has progressed shes come out of her shell so to speak and i love the char shes opened up as ^^ (plus her translations are as funny as hell to read XDDDD)

i eargerly await the next chapter ^^

Yunasgrace
person Mezzer52
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another update?! And you answered one of my questions! Weeeee, I feel so special. :D Like I said though, I wasn't really expecting any concrete replies to my musings, but am still quite delighted that you did! Thanks so much!

Mik and Paw's position in the tribe seems to be balanced precariously on a ledge at the moment and I wonder how it would all work out. Engaged to be engaged? It's like how kids in high school exchange "promise rings." Do Sidhe wear any kind of metal jewelry/ornamentation/accessories? I can't remember you mentioning it, but I think it might be difficult to smelt metal out in the forest in of there old time trees. I'm thinking there jewelry is mostly of the leather or sea shell variety. Maybe Mik can get/wear a ring for Paw to demonstrate to people that he is taken so Paw won't get all jealous/angry again like over that blonde in the museum. :D

Sometimes I'm left confused because there seems to be many story arcs convoluted within each other that I forget little details that make it easier to understand. But, that's just like in real life where everything is jumbled and combined. It's only in fiction where characters face only one conflict at a time, resolve it, and then move on to the next. I'm sure your notes on this story are intensive. I'm not complaining about the intricacy though, far from it! It just makes your story that much more enjoyable, and if I have to go back a couple of chapters and re-read them, that's fine with me because sometimes I feel like I glean additional information the second or third go around. It's just like watching your favorite movie over and over again. :D

Take care and have fun writing the next bit! I can't wait!