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Hi, was rereading partner and a few of your older stories today and noticed that the formatting you once had is now gone. Can you look into this please? Wall of text seems to lose some oomphf from your story.

The formatting for some of your chapters seemed to have gone screwy. It makes the reading hard and I wished to bring it to your attention.

Am Re-reading Partner and Sequel for shits and giggles!
Just finished chapter 154 WTF and was blown away
Once again by the magnificence that is you! Thanks
Again for writing and sharing it with us!

Honesty. I loved this story. I cried when Mik "Died" only to freak out then read the rest in relief. How long did Mik live after?? WHEN THEN HELL DID MARI GET WITH RAL?! But overall. I am beyond excited. And now am going to trip over myself to get to the sequel and read that!

HI,

first of all and most importantly: This is a great story. I enjoyed it immensely so THANK YOU for sharing it.
I started readin it a while ago and stopped around chapter 50 it got too philosophical. But this time I could not stop. I ate in front of the computer and took my laptop to work to read on the train and during the breaks. I cut my sleep so I could read.

I would like to offer a bit constructive (?) criticism. I go through this because! I really like this story so please do not become depressed or anything.
It may lead to you
(a)agreeing and changing or
(b)thinking you do not see it as changeworthy
(c)realizing that I did not get it... :D

- After you started the sequel (haven`t read it yet)I got the feeling that I only got to see part of the story-e.g: There were no more infos about the new sidhe Mm. Suddenly he got a name and past change and it was not mentioned before. Mik came home one night and the tribe was upstairs. (Then Lillow confessed her "crime" with Hohi) And Paw said he would explain later. He never does.

-The part after Miks death feels like an epilogue and a little sudden and rushed. The feeling and voice of the story changes. Una is telling the story now.

- The chapter gods feels disconnected to the story.

- They were all slowly coming to a conclusion with the family tree and its connection to Mm, the awaited awakening of Una, and Mik was coming to the realization, that the end of the world was the best. They were searching for the key and bam Mik dies Una appears and the world is dead.... What How Why......WTF is the feeling I got reading the last couple chapter. I do not want everything explained in every little detail- that is nit how the story and the sidhe work butthey were working on a question, coming close to an answer and then just ... stopped?

-> Basically: the end feld rushed and left questions and the story was GREAT.

Just re read all the way to chapter 194. *happy sigh* Gods I love this story. It's everything I could want all wrapped up in good writing and fantastic plot. *grin* Just very happy you chose to share this with everyone! *happy squal* On to Sequel!!! Again. *laughing*

I really,really, enjoyed reading this (I spent 3 days non stop to finish it). I don't have the words... But it holds you. I really enjoyed this. And can't wait to read the rest of this world

I just finished the chapter where Mik cries, and I can't seem to stop the tears running down my face. I read the author note in which you were explaining how you don't think in terms of what color eyes, etc. I think it makes things more powerful--it's all about relationships, not bodies.
Thanks for the commitment to writing such a big work.
<3

That was so beautiful!

“The gods envy you, Mik, they look down and they watch you and they cry because a man who does not believe in them is doing their good work, not for fear of them, but out of the goodness of his heart. They envy and cherish your existence.” ......That was so beautiful!