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by Aya

person crazykitty
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I´m voting to pool sex...
person Suryallee
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Laughs herself silly...dirty thoughts...at least this time Paw have not gone ballistic against Mik too much, laughs.
Iltuenshianopiactashton??? that name made a knot into my poor tongue ^^!
person Mezzer52
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I vote for pool sex!

And is it bad that I haven't started reading Sequel yet? I think I started reading the first chapter, saw that Mik and Paw weren't there, got all confused, and then ran back to the comfort to this story. Sorry. I'll try again in the future. lol.
person Mezzer52
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Potty mouth Paw! lol. I guess Paw's cursed at all the journalists now.
person Avernion
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes! A cliffy. A really evil cliffy. A realy, really reeeaaally evil cliffy.
person Suryallee
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hohi was adorable...who is Auhi...lol
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Angry Paw scares me! lol Nice reflexes Mik. I get the feeling things are about to get very ugly. Well... more than they already are.
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was cute how Paw was sort of in awe of the television studio. But why was he so pissed at Ell?
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What has gotten into Paw?! I thought he wasn't going to be Whisper. Wow, I'm really sitting on the edge of my seat now. I really am amazed at how you've managed to show how people are uncomfortable with the unknown and a race that outlives them and outsmarts them. Wonderful. I can't wait for more. Luckily with your update schedule I won't have long to wait. Thank you so much.
person Loves to laugh
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh.....
Just read new update (Chap. 130)

Now I'm on pins and needles, the mesa a the new Whisper?
Mik and Paw will have their hands full.
Great update!