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by Aya

person Suryallee
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sure, wenstday it is then, thats tomorrow, right?
Hopefully I got the right time reference here ^^!
person Mezzer52
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“Want Mik, not partner.” Paw snapped back at Mik.

*sigh* I wholeheartedly agree with Paw. :)

“All people are stupid, just to varying degrees.

hehehehe. So true!

“Then we pull out the big guns.”

ooohh! I like seeing bad guys go boom! Especially big boom! lol.

I'll try and make it to the chat meeting, but no guarantees. :( Maybe I'll just make a huge list of questions and then email them to you. LOL. Nah, I wouldn't do that to you. I'm sure you would get quite bored and yell at my idiocy. :P

Oh, and what was up with those couple of lines with Lillow and the camera? Is that suppose to signify something important, or was it just a side description of the other people in the room?

At first, when I saw the title of the chapter, I was thinking there was going to be some big terrorist attack and that someone was going to die or something! And then, I read and saw it was about the hackers and breathed a little sigh of relief. I'm just hoping now that this terrorist faction is not that serious of a threat but still that the government/Mik/Mari/Paw don't underestimate them.

Thanks for the update and I can't wait to see what happens next! Take care!
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so i hope you don't hate me i found your story back when you were around like chapter 50 or so... and this is the first timed i reviewed... i must say that i love your story and i come to this site and see if its updated like 2 or 3 times a day, and no im not lying.... i love this story more then any other story i have read on this site or any other! once again not lying i hope you forgive me for not reviewing i just was like well... im an ass and yeah grate chapter i love it and i dont want paw to have another partner at all i think he would brake him/her lol well i cant wait for more of "partner" so yeah from a big stupid fan
person Suryallee
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Any time is alright with me^^ I have an alarm clock^_-
Oh my...I don't think the people have realized it by now that they literally play with fire here...they flick out little embers constantly at Paw , who holds a bottle with oil in their direction all the time... I wonder what do happen if he decides to drop it into the embers.
He gave them again a warning...wonder how many more it will give before all goes down the drain, ugh!
Sooo...Mik has finally caught on, eh? I wondered how long he needs this time to realize some implications with teeth and such, rofl. The tune gets harder in this chapter...all points more and more into the real disaster direction, hopefully I am wrong here.
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm still confused. I thought that the president told Mik he could still be Paw's partner, remain in the apt. and be ambassador.
person Mezzer52
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I can make either of those conference times to chat on your site. :(

So, it might just be me, but that take charge attitude from Mik in ch. 138 is pretty attractive, like when he was talking to Mari asking questions and then later slamming the reporters about their idiocy. *blush*

I felt really sad for Paw though and I just wanted to hug him when we started walking away from the reporters with that pained look. I hope Mik will be able to make it up for him later, and that these kinds of incidents don't cause any rifts/arguments to pop up between the two of them.

Oh yea, you mentioned earlier about having some kind of accessory to signify a partnership between Sidhe and people. What will Mik wear now that he isn't technically a partner. I really can't imagine Paw wearing someone else's accessory if he gets a new partner without there being some jealous/possessive spat. Does Paw even need a new partner as Whisper? Seems that Whisper and the new Ambassador to the Sidhe should have a close working relationship, and in this instance, happen to also have a close personal one as well and thus negates the need to bring in a new partner.

I'm also wondering if there weren't any other reasonings behind not making Koln the ambassador. Is the government still trying to take some kind of advantage between the personal relationship of Mik and Paw/Whisper? Maybe they just want to keep Koln in the program since he's running it well...who knows.

Anyways, I wasn't expecting the update this morning, but I'm happy there was one! Hope you had a great time celebrating your friend's birthday and that you have fun writing the next chapter! Take care!

person Mezzer52
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just went and read 135 now that you posted the next chapter. It's not as bad as I had imagined. For some reason I had imagined someone being mortally injured or something. I am worried though about what's going to happen with Mik. You can't be separating them, can you?!?! Because when you said something is coming that we will want to murder you and that this chapter begins to set something up...ahh! Don't separate them! And don't kill one of them! I know you said you liked happy endings, but damn, I don't handle cliff hangers well at all. lol. Maybe I'll just wait and not read until you have the epilogue up or something. But then you do have the sequel posted, and I don't know how that fits in to this story...I'm so confused/worried/anxious. Be kind to us readers! Please?!
person Mezzer52
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm probably the reviewer that whines the most at you, huh? Sorry if it annoys you. Ch. 136 left me more confused/anxious/sad. I really should go and read Sequel, and learn about Rel, but I'm too emotionally invested in to Paw/Mik and for some reason feel this irrational anger at this other character already. LOL. I hope hope hope hope that Mik and Paw will be able to work through this potential separation and that Mari/Koln will be able to pull strings so that Mik will be there 24/7. Maybe this will be the time for Mik to gain a better understanding of the Sidhe language and culture within the tribe? I mean, his mate is Whisper and he has a mesa and other kid in Lillow. He's pretty engrained in to the tribe at this point, but still doesn't understand many of the nuances and stuff because of the time he has to spend away from them...*sigh* Who knows.

So the only thing I can think of without reading Sequel is Rel maybe some cancer specialist? And they're going to bring him in to look over Paw? Most likely that's completely wrong. lol. Either way, hope you're doing well and that you have fun writing!
person Suryallee
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Guh?
That say it marvelously! I have yet to see where this ends and leave it to the others to search for her name...I know it! Sticks out tongue...However, this leads to several roads this can take on from now on, none is easy for Mik or Paw either but it explains how poor Rel is going to be brought into this mess called a Program. Laughs.
I pity the poor guy! I really do! And if, If this is going where I think it is, then he will have a hell of a time in the future and maybe wish to have staid in the Prison. He felt already uneasy just looking at Paw in the television...
Ok, the story then will no longer center around Paw and Mik, but it will go on and thats what counts in the end.
And now the separation makes more sense to me...all else would have been disappointing greatly, since it would not do it justice, the story I mean. I am curios about the sidhe story you mentioned, sounds interesting to me, please do, it will be fun to read that I am sure^^
person Suryallee
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To all and all… if I did some kind of chat… hour … thing… on my site… would anybody be interested in asking me insane questions and whatnot for that hour?
Oooops! Forgot to tell, I would like the^^ But I sit in Germany so I would need to know the GMT time? Is that rightly spelled? For example here it is 16,20 PM now in Pacific time it is 07,20 AM. Hope that make any sense to you ^^!