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by Aya

schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I agree, intelligence is a turn on. Mik is growing up. Sigh, so sweet to watch.
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering all my questions! Now I'm not confused anymore! Mostly! Hahah

Poor Rel; he's been through an awful lot since he was young.
person Lisa
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering my question about Whisper and Paw! Now I understand!

Paw asked the wrong question. He asked why is Paw's life more important than Mik's; shouldn't he have asked why does Mik think his (Mik's) life is more important than Paw's? B/C obviously, Mik thought his (Mik's) life was more important than Paw's. Do you know what I'm trying to say? I don't know if I'm explaining myself correctly. Anyway, I agree w/Mik; I'd probably be really selfish too!
person suryallee
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was right...it gets harder in the setting. That poor guy/Sidhe...am I bad for wishing for him to have the chance to kill what hurt him?
person wizli
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually left too speechless to review (or my son's school bus arrives home earlier and then promptly forget everything about AFF to get breakfast xDDD), I should've left a review for every chapter that has impressed me and, well, that's a lot of chapters so now I feel guilty and a little ashamed, I hate to be an ungrateful reader specially when you're writing something so great...
This new and improved Mik is amazing, he's more assertive and subtle, maybe now he's more worthy of being Whisper's companion?. And tell me if I finally got one of the hints, ¿is the death Whisper predicted one of three the gods got as vengeace for the latest killing?, y/y?. I can't wait to see who Rel's sidhe is, it'll be Paw or the new male? (I'm voting for the male, but who knows...).
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah, I didn't realize that Paw was definitely, definitely Whisper. I mean, I know I read that they were talking about Paw (Auhi) being Whisper, but I thought AFTER the current Whisper died. Shit, did he die? Did I miss that? Where the fuck have I been? So now Paw is definitely Whisper. Wouldn't they have like a ceremony or something, honoring him? Like the presidential inaugaration? Anyway, so now are you setting up the survivor (if he does indeed survive), to kill Rel if need be? But if the survivor lives, will he be placed in the looney bin?
person suryallee
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFL!
Poor, poor Mik! Ptes him...I loooove that guy!!!!
Sly look...I am still trying to guess wich one he is: The prophet? I mean, from your little education in legends a few chapters before...in sequel or in Partners? Man I am slowly getting confused with both! >.< ^^! ^^! ^^!
SORRY!
person suryallee
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am shocked...
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is horrible; who killed these people, I mean Sidhe, they were Sidhe, right? The people killed them? Even the children? This chapter was really gross. On the plus side, you can get a job writing w/Stephen King! lol
person suryallee
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Laughs, I soo enjoyed the last chapters...Souse Is scary! No matter what...past is crazy!