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by Aya

schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least a bullet to the arm didn't derail Paw's lust! Hahaha

But who the hell shot him?

Wish we could all have healers like Lillow and Essuan.
person BabyVampy
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! *snickering* Yelling at the gods... or rather the one... *laughing*

Great chapter!
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, what a bitch Delwar is! To insult Paw like that! I can't wait to find out what Paw does next!
person Loves to laugh
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that Mik is going to to take care of this woman, if not then let Essaun or Souse get a hold of her and put her in her place. Don't leave Paw hurt!

P.S. I hope that you feel better and I have missed you this last few days, and was happy with the Sequel update also.
person Avernion
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. Ohno-Ohno-Ohno. The bitch. And they let her speak like that? Redemption, rain down in burning fire, I say! Land on the head of the wicked plastic one, I plead you. Let her shiny curls be undone! And give her a slap ones you're at it. xC

Paw, don't take it to heart. Don't let it effect you! She's so not worth it x'C
person SunaoTsuji
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, definitely enjoyed this and I love how you've kept me on my toes on where this is going. I'd expect something to happen and then you go and twist it around n leave me in a daze. Kinda like, what the heck just happened? Then the realization hits and I'm enjoying your writing way too much as I've spent the last couple of days just reading into the early morning. I really want to know what happens next and I wonder if Partners and Sequel will come together or will Partners end at one point and have Sequel, since it's still in progress, pick up from where it stops? And should this ever get published, I'm buying the first copy!
person BabyVampy
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It took me three... almost four days to read this all from beginning to end. Gah! I'm so dileriously happy to find an author that updates regularly, is great at editing, and has a fantastic story with an actual plot! I would like to thank you ever so much for writing this story. I also want you to know that you have another loyal reader/fan following your work!
person Suryallee
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM

“Are we feeling a bit cocky?” Mik asked Paw, “branding me as yours so blatantly.”

“Next fucking woman who hits on you is getting my fist in her face,” Paw snapped back, “I don’t care if they have fucking breasts or if they can have sex without lubrication or if they can change their hair colour every five seconds if it so pleases them. You are not up on the block, you are not for sale and yes, damn it, you are mine.”
Laughs so madly that she spilled her coffee all over the desctop...that was hilarious!
A little possessive, arent we? Lol
Oh, and my bet is either Osht or Mm for the position of the leader^^
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wait, they took picturs of Rel and Mm together? Poor Rel!

And kudos to Paw!!! He is so romantic when he's being all possessive! And I like the speech about the tribe and the little ragamuffins! He's pretty comical.
person Suryallee
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mik the living pillow^^
I loved that scene^^