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Mik got the feeling he had just opened a can of worms or something
...
Not only Mik!

***points above at the anon...Thats was me, sorry T__T

Taln's so cute! The bad side are the people who just destroyed all those Sidhe, right? So, everything that Rel and Muan were doing in Sequel, Mari caught on camera? Or Rel downloaded the images to Mari's computer? And I didn't realize that Rel owned his own company; I guess I didn't realize he's such a smart guy.


Anyway, have a wonderful, safe New Year!!!!!

Uwaah! You used the phrase "the such and kind"! My GOD, I haven't seen that phrase since... Since...

Nai: Since you read actual books.

:blushes: Uhm. Yeah, that's about right... Ahaha...

But anyway.
Just wanted to say that I'm loving the story-

Forge: "Like a dog bite loves gangrene" loving or "like fire" loving or "how wonderful" loving or-

Masu: :duct tapes his mouth shut:

-aaaaaaaand that the only reason I haven't reviewed since... whenever I last reviewed is that there haven't been any speed bumps of things I need to tell you since then.
Uh. Yeah.

This chapter (ch 20):
"wondering why the government would [[by]] such synthetic woods" wrong 'by'; use 'buy'.
"from the other rooms would be [[slipper]] when wet, this would not be as bad" prolly typo; use 'slippier' or 'slippy'. If you like.

Love,
desperate fan The Head Baka

Edit: Just realized this hadn't sent. Yeah. I'm a nincompoop.

I've been reading this, dear heart, and I must say I'm extremely impressed.
This is quite an undertaking; it's also an insanely complicated plot.
Seeing as I can't (or rather, if I were to approach the prospect logically, haven't) produce(d) an idea I'm willing to follow through with (they're all too shallow) I am immensely attracted to (in this order) long, good stories, good stories, and long stories, in general, but I like to pretend I'm something of a connoisseur of online fiction. ...Particularly yaoi. I'm just too damn LAZY to write my own things! :laughs hysterically: Isn't it a hoot?! <:D
So it is my unusual pleasure to tell you that you are at the top of my list.

Forge: Get over yourself.

Nai: Lazy b*tch.

Quiet!
:clears throat: In any case, if it pleases you, dear heart, I'd like to... (help?).... you out by letting you know when I see a grammar or spelling error.
And keeping an eye out for a publisher for this fantastic story of yours! :Good Guy smile and pose:

Masu: ... :facepalm:

A-anyway. >////>

This chapter:
"Leave it to the government to [[higher]] illegal workers" - higher = more high; hire = employ.

Yup. That's it.

I'll leave a note every time I see something like that.

Happy New Year's!

Love,
The Head Baka

merry x-mas and thank you for this so amazing story. I hope that will be as much more chapters.

Ok, I know Edno hasn't been in Partners in awhile; but I forgot why. Where did he go? And why does he have it in for the Sidhe to do this horrific thing to their people? Er...Sidhe?

Uh Oh! I wasn't expecting that...hope he is wrong and Edno wasn't it.
One think wonders me, wouldn't have the sidhe known if Edno did something like that???

I hope you're feeling better. I notice that you get sick a lot. You should take a lot of Vitamin C and Echinacea tablets. A few times a day, like 4 or 5 Vitamin C tablets and one Echinacea tablet and you may be as good as new! They work wonders!


Sad chapter; it actually gave me chills b/c I thought back to the horrors that the US went thru after 9/11 w/the threat of biological warfare (Anthrax).

Yuo..didn't like it then I take it.however loved your two updates^^