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i have high respect for russell taylor now. i love the ever-so-romantic side of him and cole's snarky side makes a perfect combination. the way he stood up for his relationship with cole made him even more sexier. i can't wait to see what'll happen next.

Russel is like going over the edge toward a psychotic break, and I totally love it. It's about time that he flipped out. This crap with Trevor is wack. And what is up with Cole?! Grow a pair dude. Like your just gonna let that slimey bastard get away with rape?! I say it's time they get midevil on his ass. Revenge style.

I've read up to chapter 4, and I really like your story. However, that being said - the climax of chapter 4 itself was disappointing. You had Cole figure out that Russell was going the whole 'I'm making to make you jealous with another guy' route, as well as considering that Russell just lied about his relationship with Jake.

I thought you were going to break from cliche and have Cole fuck with Russell - have Cole act like he's convinced that Russell just wanted an easy lay and had Jake on the side all along. Then when Russell panics and thinks his little scheme has totally gone to hell, Cole can then call him out on his whole idiotic 'make Cole jealous with Jake' bit. Instead, you have COLE apologize to Russell. Yes, he left in the morning and Russell was supposed to be upset - yet he turns around and plays his little game and generally does all he can to act like a prick. Instead of say, actually talking to him.

I realize that I sound a little crazy and am talking about the characters as if they were real (and I'm not even into chapter 5 yet), but I just found chapter 4 to be so jarring and convoluted.

Did... the obvious happen, or are we in for a suprise? XD
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hope you feel better by then, too. =)

~jea

I figured Trevor had it in him to do something so horrible. When he first showed up at Cole's place unannounced I thought something might jump off, but none the less I still felt surprised when the scenes actually took place in the last chapter. But why would Cole not want to report it? I dont understand why he wouldn't. Pride? Does Trevor have more on him (control) then we know? Whatever it may be, the situation seems pretty bad. Will it get even worse?

Oh the drama....

Trevor should die. Wow I feel so much better now that I said it!! :) no but really I want to know what his problem is. And Cole's. He's being abused, and unless Trevor really has nothing to do with the rape, why is he letting it happen when he's such a fighter for everything else? I'm intrigued. It feels like he covers up for his fears and insecurities with the snarkiness and cynical world view and yet he's still strongwilled and clearly doesn't keep his tongue in his pocket (does that even make sense in English?). So yeah, I'm really intrigued!!! I want to know more about his relationship with Trevor...
Oh and Russel. He's like a hyperactive teddy bear. Although I get the feeling there's sharp teeth and claws underneath all that sugar and spice and that Trevor just might get up close and personal with some of our rich playboy's nastier attributes...

Thanks for the new chapters. I think Russell and Cole are in trouble because Trevor is obviously completely insane. Trevor and Cole have some really screwed up dynamics going on. I hope you feel better. Looking forward to the next chapter.

It's just like stupid Trevor to ruin a perfect Cole and Russel moment. You know what would be funny? It would be funny if Trevor died...slowly.

I don't know if m reply posted...my computer freaked out before it loaded...so I will post again to be on the safe side...

Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed this update; you did a good job on it. Poor Cole...he was hurt so bad...I hope Trevor gets in trouble or gets a taste of his own medicine soon. Cole admitted his feelings to Russell....and Russell is so happy...but Cole is acting strange...I wonder why...at least Russell has a feeling that Trevor did those horrible things to Cole...and now he shows up at the hospital...wonder what will happen next....update soon!!

I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER SOON!!

I hope you're feeling better! I know it sucks to get sick right before or when school just starts. Hope you're all better now! Good chapter; I was thinking that it was Trevor that beat Cole to a pulp and raped him and left him in an alley. If not, how the HELL did he know that Cole was in the hospital? Unless...Trevor did do it and of course knew he would be taken to a hospital, and showed up, knowing that Cole wouldn't remember who attacked him. Can't wait for the next chapter!