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May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story started out so well...I started out liking it, but it began to bother me after a while, and by the final chapter I was just flat out annoyed. First off, I'd love to know the location of any clinic on Earth that gives AIDS test results the same day, even with a rush on them. Also, both characters seemed fairly blase about the fact that they had already had sex...if someone were to have sex with me thinking they were infected with an STD, condom or no, they would have a LONG way to go to earn my forgiveness...if they EVER got it. I also wasn't happy by how unaffected Cole seemed by the rape. Rape is traumatic, and has more than just physical effects. Yes, even for men.
You misused several words, as well. Crooned - means sang in a murmur. Leud - a vassal or tenant in the early Middle Ages.( I believe you meant to use lewd. I have no idea what you meant for crooned.)
You misused several words, as well. Crooned - means sang in a murmur. Leud - a vassal or tenant in the early Middle Ages.( I believe you meant to use lewd. I have no idea what you meant for crooned.)
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June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! AFF pulled your story Silver spoon because,
it lacks a disclaimer or something like that.
FYI enjoying your story.
it lacks a disclaimer or something like that.
FYI enjoying your story.
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May 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I saw this and thought, "Omg, I remember that story!" And it's a great story that I just realized I really miss! lol
So I'm looking forward to your update! :) And welcome back! =)
So I'm looking forward to your update! :) And welcome back! =)
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May 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is a gem of a story :)I wonder why he hides behind fake glasses, maybe he doesn't want people to hit on him like that Perverted mr. Taylor LOL. I actually don't see any chemestry between the two of them yet. But I'm going to read on :)
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June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Review for 1-9: So I really, really, really, and absolutely adore Russell and Cole. Cole for being such a spitfire and his stick-and-begruding-carrot attitude with Russell was hilarious. Love Russell for being affectionate, spoilt and being controlled so by Cole. There were some moments in the story where I thought Russell was stupid and Cole forgave him too easily. I just don't think it was in Cole's nature up to then to be like that with someone he likes, with someone he hates, yes, he'll put it out of his mind and totally forgets them but not with Russell. Anyhow, I eventually made peace with it or more like, what took place next totally eclipsed that oddity. Everyone that read this story knows what I'm talking about right. Cole's attitude was weird but appropriate. Weird because Cole let Trevor threatened him into silence and against retaliation. Appropriate because Cole doesn't care for that asshole and so Cole wouldn't let him accomplish more if Cole were to break down. The sweet and tender moments that followed between Russell and Cole were nicely added.
So... maybe I have too much faith in the justice system but why the heck isn't Trevor in trail for his violating restraining order. He approached and contacted Cole so much yet there he lives in his luxurious apt. Btw, I want him to go to prison for maybe just a day and let what he threatened would happen to Russell happened to him or have him lose his position and money? Eeh.
Just eagerly waiting to see more of Russell's punishment style.
Thank you so much for writing. Your writing style is so easy to read and the story line was engaging. The story goes where it needs to go and I was left laughing, chuckling and eagerly anticipating. I know it's been a long time since the last release but I'll still be tracking this story. Looking for another release or 2 ;p Thank you again.
Your fan,
renee
So... maybe I have too much faith in the justice system but why the heck isn't Trevor in trail for his violating restraining order. He approached and contacted Cole so much yet there he lives in his luxurious apt. Btw, I want him to go to prison for maybe just a day and let what he threatened would happen to Russell happened to him or have him lose his position and money? Eeh.
Just eagerly waiting to see more of Russell's punishment style.
Thank you so much for writing. Your writing style is so easy to read and the story line was engaging. The story goes where it needs to go and I was left laughing, chuckling and eagerly anticipating. I know it's been a long time since the last release but I'll still be tracking this story. Looking for another release or 2 ;p Thank you again.
Your fan,
renee
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AGH!!!! Don't leave it like this PLEASE!!!!!
Please.
Can't wait to see the results of his actions. I'm breathless with anticipation!
Please.
Can't wait to see the results of his actions. I'm breathless with anticipation!
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Three cheers for Russell!!
Goddammit, I love him so much!
Goddammit, I love him so much!
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh...I really hate trevor...I was so gald that russell quite his job and punched him in the jaw...and cole was trying hard to keep the secret for russell's sake...thanks for updating!
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I'm glad you're back! I've missed this story! You've got your funny back! So funny the banter between Cole and Russell during sex and Russell making breakfast! Hahahah
Also, the stuff Russell said to his dad, very funny. Well, he may have screwed himself (no pun intended), but at least he got Trevor back!
Also, the stuff Russell said to his dad, very funny. Well, he may have screwed himself (no pun intended), but at least he got Trevor back!
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN !! That was a chapter and a half !! I LOVE IT! Russell is amazing, and hey as they say, if you're going to go out, go out with a bang ;)
Looking forward to what is to come!
Looking forward to what is to come!