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My gods you are an amazing writer. I have read a few of your creations and have loved them all. You have a wonderful imagination so thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

I LOVE this. Greek mythology has always been a huge fascination of mine. I love how you've taken the story and made it your own! It made me all happy :) Thank you for sharing your writing. I totally loved how you portrayed Hades and Persephone too! I will have to read your other.

I keep coming back to read this story, it's still one of favorites (even though it's hasn't been updated in a while).

Awesome story! I've always felt that Hephaestus was an amazing figure who never got any closure and I love the fact that you really created a character for him from the bits and pieces mythology gave us. I know you haven't updated in a while but could please post an epilogue (more than the brief mention you had in "Rejuvenation?") thank you! And once again, fabulous story!

Its been a year and I still come back to read this story. It always makes me happy and I love the morals behind it. Hephaestus is such a sweet god despite his looks but isn't beauty only skin deep?

Anyway, I know you are. Use with darkness becomes her, but I hope you will find the time to finish this sometime!

A beautiful backdrop to what will hopefully be a beautifully crafted story. :)
I always wondered about this god in particular and I'm glad that someone finally wrote a story about him.
I can't wait to read more!

-MD

What an amazing story! I loved Darkness Becomes Her, and this is not quite at the same level, but definitely one of the better stories I've found on FictionPress (I got here through that site). I think your syntax needs some work to make it flow more. Sometimes the dialogue seems like it wasn't quite so well thought-out, and even the narration has some areas that seem a little out of place. However, that being said, I loved how you developed the classic characters from mythology and gave them your own interpretation, and made each one unique. Please continue the story, I can't wait for the next chapter!

I am really enjoying this and I hope you plan to continue soon! I can't wait to see what Hera wants.

Love your myth stories. Hope Aphrodite gets some good payback coming towards her.

I really enjoy this story. Usually your main male characters are confident. I like that this time it was a woman who was the bold lover. Please update soon. I hope you consider making this story longer than a few chapters because it has so much potential.