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for Garden of Eden

by SilkenPetal

person Child of the darkened Moon
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and can't wait to hear more. I couldn't agree more about majority of pregnant teens being normal kids.
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. can't wait for the next chapter.
person Akumu
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story...good start! :D (by the way this is a new subject I'm not used to seeing so Kudos for being original!)
person lovelyl
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay update soon. :D
person YellowRose
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like it :)
Can't wait for chapter 3
person Sara
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... didn't see this when Chapter 1 was posted. Glad I saw it this time around! I really like it! It's super interesting, and I'm totally hooked to read more. You are very talented - it's not all dialogue, but it's not all detail - it's a good mix, with a good amount of feeling/emotion thrown in.

Can't wait for chapter 3!
person lovelyl
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like. :D