rate_review Reviews

Wow... I thought this was very good. I really identified with the main character (you?), and I'd love to see where this goes.

Something I'd like to see would be a greater character developement; things seemed a little fast-paced. Maybe if you took some more time introducing new characters, you'd give readers a chance to 'ease in' to things.

If you plan on writing more, I'm really interested in seeing where this is going.

Are you danish? Because you have a mistake, where it looks like you wrote the danish term and forgot to correct it later. I have marked it...
continued their conversation as if they hadn't just flocked over to my table and descended "en masse" for no reason.
Just thought that if it was me, I wanted someone to tell me.

Peace