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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha, Jayden seriously rocks! XD He's so cute! ^_^ David sounds pretty cool :) And I like how protective-of-sorts Tomas is, ha ha. I can't wait to read more! :D Please keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a cute story, but somehow Jay keeps acting like a little kid instead of an almost 16 yr. old. I don't know any 16 yr. olds who stick their tongues out anymore. But.....it is a cute story. Just one little typo: very is very not vary. Also, the last chapter was kind of hard to read; maybe it was the format, there were strange symbols at the beginning of the sentences. But, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great.
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay. A date with the hot David guy. Jayden is enjoying his new lifestyle. It ia like he has found his true calling. I really like Tomas too. I can't wait to read more.
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Muhahahah I like it so far....wow what a crazy person...he`s kind of weird, Jayden, I mean. Cool story,I`m wondering about chases role in this thing...He seems kind of interested in Jayden. Or maybe I`m reading thewrong things between the lines.
I want to know, so keep updating!!
I want to know, so keep updating!!
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh, I just read this story on Fictionpress a few days ago, I love love LOVE it! Eee! It's so funny and just...awesome. I'm glad your posting here too, hopefully you get a brand new chapter out soon too! :D
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He should kiss Chase, clearly. He could teach him things, right? ;)
Sounds interesting!
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Sounds interesting!
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Jayden. This is possibly one of the funniest fics i have ever read. It is so much fun and Jayden is hilarious. I think Chase has a bit of a thing for Jayden xx Update really soon plz xxx
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two
I love this kid!!!
The first chapter totally got me in touch
with my inner child!!!
(And hubby really appreciated me rolling
over him to turn out the lights last night!!!
At least that was how I interpreted all those sounds he made!)
Wow! Dialog witty...check, dialog flows...check, characters engaging... check!!!!
Thank you!!!
R
I love this kid!!!
The first chapter totally got me in touch
with my inner child!!!
(And hubby really appreciated me rolling
over him to turn out the lights last night!!!
At least that was how I interpreted all those sounds he made!)
Wow! Dialog witty...check, dialog flows...check, characters engaging... check!!!!
Thank you!!!
R
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This really had me laughing. Hard. Jayden is QUITE the character, and I love you for it. Thanks so much for this!
ps-I know the feeling of being satisfied with something seemingly unusual. Although it wasn't as awesome as a perfect Puma pounce, it was still pretty awesome.
ps-I know the feeling of being satisfied with something seemingly unusual. Although it wasn't as awesome as a perfect Puma pounce, it was still pretty awesome.