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I love Chris so much. He really is a princess. Frederic can be his dark knight in dark armor. At least he learned that he has to bring a (bribe) presents if he is going to stop by. I think the twins will have lots of fun messing with Fred. I am looking forward to reading more.

This is pretty interesting, I'm curious to see where this story goes. It's really good and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

This story is so interesting. But why were those thugs afraid of Tissue Prick? And TP left poor Chris there w/o even helping him up! Oh, and by the way, I'm being just a nitpick, but why did the twins have to take a shower after dinner, when they took baths after school? Just wondering. Anyway, good story; I'm hoping Chris is gonna make it!

Wow.....poor Chris...he needs a hug! And the mean Savior guy needs to get the stick out of his ass!

Great work!

I don't usually read this kind of story, normally I into fantasy blood, thunder, and yaoi sex, but your story caught my eye, beside I need to expand my horizon. It very well writen and held my interest, so please keep writing for I can't wait to see what going to happens next, beside who said men can't have motherly care giving tendenacies... sometimes men can be better mothers than women. LOL G

I love the story so far. I love the twins and Chris and would love to read more.

This looks really good and has a lot of potential!!! Great work so far!

I love your new story. It is very promising and the twins are so cute. Is Anita related to Chris or was she his neighbor? There is one point in the story where you call them six year olds but in other places you call them five. I think they seem more like six year olds if they are doing homework and such. Either way, they are very cute. I cant wait to read more.

"Chris had only been watching 24 for 15 minutes when the door to the boy’s room creaked open and two six year olds one in a Cars pyjama"