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person Colorful
schedule May 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I think it's brilliant. Your characters are so interesting! I love that both your main characters are masculine, and that the guy with gentle, nurturing qualities is a big bear. I really hope you continue writing in general, and this story in particular. Thanks for sharing!
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you also have to update this!! first time reading it but like very much. Not everyday you can read about a average abit on the chubby said guy instead of hot sexy lean man...= D I perfer all men as long as they have a great personality...uh not that u would care >_> But yeaa...I luv chris and fred seems like an ass but i can already see their life together...fred the moody husband chris the "housewife" well sorta, anywho pls pls dont ignore any of my request =(
person fluffiebunny
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww, poor chris, i hope something good happens to him soon.
person kinky shakes
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had originally started reading your other stories,but got hooked on this one instead.
This story is so different from what im used to reading,but i can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next either way.
Keep up the good work, i can't wait to see what the twins are gonna say the next time they encounter tissue prick....
heh, he sounds like a villain at this point. ^_^
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next.. I can't wait for someone to love Chris e's suck a great character
person MysticMoon
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'M TOTALLY IN LOVE!
Seriously, it is a fresh and new plot
the characters are likeable and realistic (and also not drop dead sexy as you find in most fics here)
the twins are adorable and funny
I really like how you have thought this up and I absolutely CANNOT wait for more :)
No I'm joking I can wait but I'll be eagarly waiting :)
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going so far. I'm totally digging the kids.
person Kiad
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like it, looking forward to more updates
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, TP had a conscience! But not before he stole money from Chris. At lease he got Chris home and bandaged up. Oh, I had a question: are the twins five or six? In some paragraphs they're five, and in others, they're six. Just wondering.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really don't know how to handle Frederick....but I think Chris needs to hit him for being so mean, especially after stealing that book!

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