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Ahhhhh, you can't leave it like that!!!! Hahahah Great chapter, actually the whole story is great! I loved Vincent's brother, what an ass! And how Vincent's mom was so worried about those other kids in the fight! Too funny! Oh, btw, not to nitpick, but I think the story would read easier if you put the characters thoughts in single quotes, instead of double quotes. The double quotes are for the dialogue. Just a suggestion....can't wait to find out what happens next in their drunken stupor!

Yes, I would like to see more chapters :)

For your first story it seems to be off to a good start. The characters are likeable. I look forward to seeing where you take it.

Hey good start! Poor Vincent, having his "worst day"! Looking forward to an update!

Nice new story... I like the fact that Damian has Vincent's back and that they shut up Mr. Football player and his friends. That was pretty funny. They make a nice team. I would love to read more.

Yay forcquick updates! You get a gold star for the day. It will be fun to see this friendship build.