rate_review Reviews

I know I just reviewed, but I forgot one thing. I was reading towards the middle of the last chapter and by the time I got to the end, I forgot to mention this: I think that Kevin's dad was acting out of character. What he said to Kevin about his grades was horrendous, callous and thoughtless. How can a parent tell their child they are worthless and good for nothing? I cannot imagine. Anyway, based on your first "draft" of the story, when Kevin's dad just remarries (if I remember correctly), his dad was so sweet and warm towards Kevin. They all went to McDonald's, Kevin and his dad had such a good talk. They seemed to have a special relationship, a good relationship. The way Kevin's dad was acting in the last chapter, was completely out of character of the first chapter. Anyway, I just wanted to comment. Maybe since you sort of deleted that whole part, you want to start fresh. It's too bad though, b/c Kevin's dad was so nice and supportive of Kevin.

Anyway, still a great story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

this story is great so far. Please do continue with it soon :)

whoa...didn't expect that. the sending each other pictures, i mean. kinda weird. but I'm glad that sky is finally opening up to kevin. can't wait for more action between the two to start. hope you update soon. as well as your other stories. can't wait!!!!

XD I love this story so far : ) I really do hope you continue it,
I really like your way of writing

Great story; Sky's warming up to Kevin, about time! I like the texts back and forth; it's cute how they're starting to tease one another. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great story. I like to see the growing attraction between Sky and Kevin. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter

Mmmm...step broth text smex. That's hot.

awwww! dont end it there! i hope you really update soon, cause i really cant wait. Hope the next chapter is up soon. Looking forward to it!! ; )

I've always loved the name Sky. I know it's kinda a freeze dried hippie name, but it's sweet. I love hoe step brother stories are kinda kinky because they're like brothers, but they're enough not brothers for it to be socially acceptable..not that I care about what's socially acceptable. It's just funny.

Interesting story so far. I hope you continue it.