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lol ok I haven't finished the story yet just had to drop in this little review lol

I am an opera Vocal major in University and OMFG I love how you used "octave" in its proper meaning let alone used it at all :p I love it :p

:) yaay this are starting to heat up!
Whoo hoo! awesome job

Yay! Kevin and Sky are finally together. It is so sweet because Sky seems to cherish Kevin so much. He has probably been secretly in love with him for years. I am sad that Kevin's father could be so mean to his own son. Especially when his wife and stepson are there too. It made me very sad. I hope Kevin's stepmother will not put up with any mistreatment. I love the love scenes. I can't wait to read more of this story. You probably already know but Chapter 3 uploaded with some formatting problems. Is it possible to reupload that chapter? I am also looking forward to His Rythm, My Melody. Another of my favorite stories.

Loved it ;) Especially the last scene, very hot

Hey, love the story, though I'm concerned about Kevin's dad - just get the feeling he's gonna screw everything up somehow ;) Although, of course, that may lead to delicious angst... Oh, and I think the format Lisa was talking about in the fourth chapter was that something went wrong when you uploaded the chapter, and it caused a load of symbols to replace your apostrophes, I noticed it too. Sometimes uploaders can go really odd.

I just started to read the latest chapter, but I had to stop b/c I'm confused: I thought Katlyn (sorry if I misspelled her name) and Bruce were going out? If they are, how come they never kissed? And if they're not, then why is she so worried about seeing Derrick?

Ok, gonna go back and finish!

This is a wonderful story! I hope that you update as soon as possible. I love your writing style!

Poor Bruce; I feel bad for him. It'll be hard seeing Katlyn w/Derrick.

Good chapter w/Sky and Kevin. Thank God they're finally in sync and not at each other's throats!

Sorry about the confusion with the story. I could have sworn this was the story where Kevin's dad marries Sky's mom and they have to move. They're all in the same car, w/all their belongings. Sky has this box with a sword in it; his prized possession. When they get to the house he shows it to Kevin. I think either Sky or Kevin, I don't remember, opens up about their deceased parent and they seem to grow closer. Anyway, then things start happening just like in your story. The same exact with the texting, Sky walking in on Kevin, etc. Weird. Maybe if someone on here is reading this and knows what story I'm talking about, let me know; now it's driving me NUTS!!!! lol

Anyway, I'm looking foward to the next chapter!

ooooh I love this chapter!! Yay they love eachother! : )
now.....I await the sex chapter I know that will come soon *hint hint* oooh cant wait for that...
hope you update the next chappie soon! can't wait!!!!

Glad to see you updated! Haven't read this one in awhile; I had to go back and re-read it! Did you change the title? And what happened to the beginning, when Kevin, Sky, Sky's mom and Kevin's dad were in the car driving to whatever state they were going to live in?

Also, in the last chapter, the format was really weird, there were all these strange "signs"? I don't know what you call them, like exclamation points everywhere.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!