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for Unnatural Love

by YaoiFreak1990

person CayneSalem
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey there listen i really like this story, let me know when u add more to it if u r, kay i would love yo read more n see where this goes.
person Holly
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:) Man I love this story I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person kylee123
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapters! I love this story. I am glad that Todd finally confessed to Andrew. They just need to make sure that they don't get caught. I love all your stories. Your characters are very endearing.
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the premise of the story and I think that both characters are cute and fun to observe interacting. That said, I was often confused while reading over which character was speaking. They interrupt each other a lot, so they could use more identifiers.
person Juana13
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update again soon! I am loving this story!!!
person Juana13
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh very interesting!! I can't wait for another chapter. Hope its up soon. Loving all of your stories, and hope you update at least one of them soon. ; )
person GellyBelly
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Niiice! Some incest!!!
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was some tension. My little heart was pounding. I hope you write some more.
person kylee
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read some more of this story.