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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
^_^ nice to see you again. and nice to see Mikael making some progress.
I hope his story won't be dark, like the stories in November.
Jovan's young... young means a promise for the chance of being a good, kind, husband... i hope.
I hope his story won't be dark, like the stories in November.
Jovan's young... young means a promise for the chance of being a good, kind, husband... i hope.
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally....
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fast update~! Whoohoo!! Jovan is a nice name...love how Mikael finds him silly. This officer is a little bit more approachable just like Michael. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo, interesting encounter!!! :D Jovan's different than most of the military personnel you've introduced! i like it :D
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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting story. It made me so mad for Mikael's sake. I hope you continue it soon and that things look up for him eventually.
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kabi
New reader here *waves* I must say, your 'explanation' of mpreg takes up the entire bulk of the plot of this story! What with CEC and all.
It's amazing. But you keep giving hints, nothing solid just yet. I keep having to guess. It's good, i guess? XD
Like how do their nether organs look like. Do these carriers have both? Or during the change, do they loose their male organs and gain the female ones? And that other time when the doctor gave Mikael the packet, was that like, sanitary napkins, for mensuration blood flow?
All in all, this facility is sick in the head. From the looks of it, it seems like they want carriers to be good only for reproducing, and as a home maker. not members of the society. which is not equal. not fair. and they treat Mikael bad just because he wants to be a member of society.
It's good to know, at least, that he's in Blakes group. the prettier ones. that at least should save his ass for unfavorable conditions. But doesn't mean he's happy...
I wonder how far you will go with this story. Will we get to see Mikael married? *A*
also. one last thing.
YOUR PARAGRAPHS ARE HUGE! How come you have SO LITTLE line spacing in between? Could you please put more line spacings? *puppy eyes* it'll be easier to read that way~ ^___^
Do you KNOW how to put more line spacings? I dunno, maybe, it's your file type that causes this? I recall myself, having problems with the format coz when I uploaded the format just went haywire. If ya have questions about that. just e-mail me ;) (my email is on my profile)
All the best with this story! I like your idea very much. Looking forward to your update! ^__________^
- nekoii
New reader here *waves* I must say, your 'explanation' of mpreg takes up the entire bulk of the plot of this story! What with CEC and all.
It's amazing. But you keep giving hints, nothing solid just yet. I keep having to guess. It's good, i guess? XD
Like how do their nether organs look like. Do these carriers have both? Or during the change, do they loose their male organs and gain the female ones? And that other time when the doctor gave Mikael the packet, was that like, sanitary napkins, for mensuration blood flow?
All in all, this facility is sick in the head. From the looks of it, it seems like they want carriers to be good only for reproducing, and as a home maker. not members of the society. which is not equal. not fair. and they treat Mikael bad just because he wants to be a member of society.
It's good to know, at least, that he's in Blakes group. the prettier ones. that at least should save his ass for unfavorable conditions. But doesn't mean he's happy...
I wonder how far you will go with this story. Will we get to see Mikael married? *A*
also. one last thing.
YOUR PARAGRAPHS ARE HUGE! How come you have SO LITTLE line spacing in between? Could you please put more line spacings? *puppy eyes* it'll be easier to read that way~ ^___^
Do you KNOW how to put more line spacings? I dunno, maybe, it's your file type that causes this? I recall myself, having problems with the format coz when I uploaded the format just went haywire. If ya have questions about that. just e-mail me ;) (my email is on my profile)
All the best with this story! I like your idea very much. Looking forward to your update! ^__________^
- nekoii
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mikael and I know Blake understands all too well that carriers are being slowly pushed into lovely little ken/barbie dolls all vapid and fluff. Im glad that Blake still isnt pregnant - being forced into a marriage and then raped no matter how good Thad's intentions. His family deserves to have to wait a long long time as in never. I hope MIkael finds someone decent in this hellish situation.
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome please update soon I love your stories
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! :D This is probably going to be my favorite of your series.
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your stories please update this one soon. Can't wait to see what happens next